Produced by MYSELF
Lyrics by MYSELF
Melody by MYSELF
Constructive Criticism please
New Song "I'm Bad"
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New Song "I'm Bad"
by SurpassinSkillz » Jul 15th, '07, 06:36
New Song I just did... http://youtube.com/watch?v=J2DcG98TFJs
Produced by MYSELF
Lyrics by MYSELF
Melody by MYSELF
Constructive Criticism please
Produced by MYSELF
Lyrics by MYSELF
Melody by MYSELF
Constructive Criticism please
rap music is fucked up ain't it
the way these pictures are painted
u swear these fuckers are dangerous
the gangsta shit they be sayin
lock em up in the booth with a ounce of that cannibus
sit back and watch the outlandish shit they betrayin
but soon as u see em they freeze up like museums
fuckers get the runnin before i finish my sentence
and then they back threatin through speakin
bitch u were just here u dissapeared like magaicians
into thin air ..i'm like damn at least keep it consistent
the way these pictures are painted
u swear these fuckers are dangerous
the gangsta shit they be sayin
lock em up in the booth with a ounce of that cannibus
sit back and watch the outlandish shit they betrayin
but soon as u see em they freeze up like museums
fuckers get the runnin before i finish my sentence
and then they back threatin through speakin
bitch u were just here u dissapeared like magaicians
into thin air ..i'm like damn at least keep it consistent
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by Tash8 » Jul 15th, '07, 06:38
damn dude how about you fuckin feed others first before you post another song?
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by SurpassinSkillz » Jul 15th, '07, 06:39
whatcha mean?
rap music is fucked up ain't it
the way these pictures are painted
u swear these fuckers are dangerous
the gangsta shit they be sayin
lock em up in the booth with a ounce of that cannibus
sit back and watch the outlandish shit they betrayin
but soon as u see em they freeze up like museums
fuckers get the runnin before i finish my sentence
and then they back threatin through speakin
bitch u were just here u dissapeared like magaicians
into thin air ..i'm like damn at least keep it consistent
the way these pictures are painted
u swear these fuckers are dangerous
the gangsta shit they be sayin
lock em up in the booth with a ounce of that cannibus
sit back and watch the outlandish shit they betrayin
but soon as u see em they freeze up like museums
fuckers get the runnin before i finish my sentence
and then they back threatin through speakin
bitch u were just here u dissapeared like magaicians
into thin air ..i'm like damn at least keep it consistent
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by Tash8 » Jul 15th, '07, 07:01
SurpassinSkillz wrote:whatcha mean?
meaning listen to others stuff and give them a review
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by Kez » Jul 15th, '07, 12:38
It was alright
I liked the beat
Your flow was pretty good
Lyrics were okay i didn't really understand the idea of the song at times
Mixing was on point
7/10
I liked the beat
Your flow was pretty good
Lyrics were okay i didn't really understand the idea of the song at times
Mixing was on point
7/10
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by randomghost » Jul 15th, '07, 14:40
thats some real hot shit man 
..am feelin it.. G ..good job
..am feelin it.. G ..good job 
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 15th, '07, 15:13
nice work on the beat...and mixing is pretty kool
feelin it too
keep it up...and feed other people...aka me
feelin it too
keep it up...and feed other people...aka me
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by Tash8 » Jul 15th, '07, 23:48
Killa wrote:Tash8 wrote:damn dude how about you fuckin feed others first before you post another song?
how about you just how the guy no attention at all if you have that attitude?
dunno what you said there...
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 15th, '07, 23:54
^ show the guy no attention at all other than posting with a attitude
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by Tash8 » Jul 16th, '07, 00:19
^ if i dont do that, then he wouldn't feed others.
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by $0 R3@L » Jul 16th, '07, 00:22
Tash8 wrote:^ if i dont do that, then he wouldn't feed others.
people will feed your stuff if you ensure its worthy of their time and is actually worth it,we cant force people to feed just as you wasnt forced into responding to this thread
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by Tash8 » Jul 16th, '07, 00:25
^ never said anything about my stuff, seeing how i hardly post anything in the audio stage anymore, but its really not cool when he comes and keeps posting shit when everyone else gets nothing in return for feeding him
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by $0 R3@L » Jul 16th, '07, 00:29
Tash8 wrote:^ never said anything about my stuff, seeing how i hardly post anything in the audio stage anymore, but its really not cool when he comes and keeps posting shit when everyone else gets nothing in return for feeding him
i meant everyone in general and as for your last point the answer is simple,dont respond to his topics.
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 16th, '07, 21:29
i like your flow man
nice lyrics although sometimes they sound more advance than they actually are, nice hook and you got a kool voice, mixing was kool aswell
solid track man
nice lyrics although sometimes they sound more advance than they actually are, nice hook and you got a kool voice, mixing was kool aswell
solid track man
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Re: New Song "I'm Bad"
by SurpassinSkillz » Jul 17th, '07, 02:43
Thanks a lot for the love 
but whatcha mean by more advance than they are?
but whatcha mean by more advance than they are?rap music is fucked up ain't it
the way these pictures are painted
u swear these fuckers are dangerous
the gangsta shit they be sayin
lock em up in the booth with a ounce of that cannibus
sit back and watch the outlandish shit they betrayin
but soon as u see em they freeze up like museums
fuckers get the runnin before i finish my sentence
and then they back threatin through speakin
bitch u were just here u dissapeared like magaicians
into thin air ..i'm like damn at least keep it consistent
the way these pictures are painted
u swear these fuckers are dangerous
the gangsta shit they be sayin
lock em up in the booth with a ounce of that cannibus
sit back and watch the outlandish shit they betrayin
but soon as u see em they freeze up like museums
fuckers get the runnin before i finish my sentence
and then they back threatin through speakin
bitch u were just here u dissapeared like magaicians
into thin air ..i'm like damn at least keep it consistent
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