Typing while listening:
Introduction:
Lyrics are pretty good at times, but your voice is kinda weak and not much emotion at times.
Wanna Be Your Lover:
Is this a looped chorus?
Not bad, your voice sounds better than the intro.
Lyrics are okay, transition from verse to chorus isn't much good, i wasn't expecting the verse to end.
Bit short isn't it?
6/10
Breathe:
Again, your voice sounds too forced, you know like if you sing along to a loud angry song but not properly, it sounds like that.
Again, quite short, i found it hard to understand at times.
5/10
Birth Of Solitude:
Same as before.
I've noticed you don't use overlays on your choruses, or use seconds. Bad idea.
Voice on chorus sounds forced, verse is okay.
6/10
Drivin' Me Crazy:
Don't like this track.
Hook sounds way too different to your voice.
Your verses you sound bored in.
4/10
The Skit:
Reeks of "free sound effects found on the internet"
Could of added effects on your voice to make it sound like you're speaking to a crowd, but oh well.
6/10
Time to Shine:
Beat by Mart gives this track a high rating automatically because it's great.
Used overlay on this chorus, good.
Best song so far, you actually have emotion on your voice in this verse.
7/10
How I Feel:
Beat goes on for way too long at the start.
Vocals are a bit low.
Low voice suits the track/beat.
6/10
Click Clack:
Again, you sound like you're singing along to an angry song, not making one.
Beat's okay, i'm not much for that kind of stuff tbh.
Your voice sounds too bored on a track like this.
3/10
Rain (ft. Big Ax-D):
Ax makes this track.
Great hook from him.
Good beat.
Some emotion in this verse, not bad.
Ax's verse is great too. Unfortunately compared to Ax you sound really bored, being with him on the track further evidences it to the listener.
7/10
Taking Over (ft. Sajjad):
Like i've said i hate Sajjad
Good emotion in your verse here compared to the others, but still slightly lacking.
Again, Sajjad outshines you on the track both emotion wise and quality/effects wise with his verse. Some good punchlines from him.
Good hook from him too.
7/10 (Sajjad mainly got the track this rating)
The CHIT (Bonus Track):
What the hell was that at the start?
Vocals are a bit low.
Emotion is okay, again you sound like you're singing along. But not bad.
Pretty average.
5/10
Overall: Not very good to be honest. On many tracks you sound bored and emotionless. It's obviously because you're just starting out rapping, so maybe it would of been a better idea to not bother making a mixtape until your skill has developed a bit more.
You had some good lyrics and beats, not a good idea using official beats, like i said i try not to use official beats on my mixtapes now.
Definately your features helped you get high marks on the tracks they were on, not surprisingly those were my 2 favourite tracks.
If i can give you my opinion on what to do, i would just keep making tracks and posting them. Once you get consecutive good feed and your skill has improved, then you should no doubt consider making a mixtape. But at this stage i think you shouldn't of.
Just being honest with this thing, no hate or anything.
I give it 6/10
DISCLAIMER: ALL JUST MY OPINION.
thx
...can u reize it for me man..like around 15mb or 10 it would be better 
ummm i dont know how to resize from 42MB to 15MB 
