Flamez feat. C-Riz - Crazy Asses

[Flamez]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/3077488dd4d323/

thanx to tash for mixing this


start criticizing it just motivates me and chris to do better and we'll learn from this too so be honest people lol

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

any feed....i know its just a fun song...but any constructive feed

[B.A.D.]

damn, nice hook u gots there

you've got a lot better chirs, nice verse man

flamez is good too, first time I listen to ya, and you are good, but you need to turn the volume of the acapella a bit up

last verse is bad, but still nice flow on it, but still low volume of the pellaz make it hard to listen

cool mixing

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx AX.... lol

[mart85]

first, the beat is kinda cheezy but I like that lol... it's catchy

the hook is alright, good concept but your singing isn't the best...at least you tried

the first verse is good...good flow... you had energy in your voice, but a little more would help tho... but your getting better

flamez, your verse seemed good, but the pellas was a little too quiet... it should be a little louder, but I think you have to put more emotion in your voice too... sounded cool tho, you seemed to have a good flow just need to be louder and more energetic

third verse same as first

keep it up guys

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx man

[Tash8]

aboout the pella, for some reason when he recorded it, his pella kept getting quieter and quieter and quieter when i tried to amplify it, it got screwed up..

[Flamez]

aight well thanx for the feed i feel like i sucked on this one lol idk thanx

[sinemm]

hmm comments while listening
beat is very cute likes it

the chorus is cool
flow is cool
you both sound cool

not much to say more
cool track overally

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

lmao....wut a slang word...beat is CUTE lmao.....lol
thx hum... glad u liked it

[Flamez]

was this after you said i was stupid..hmm oh well thanx sin

[sinemm]

yeah after i said it
its tru
UR STUPİD!

but im still honest
it was a comment for the song

@ chris
lol
thats jus how i felt

[Flamez]

well aight then cool..

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

bump

[Kez]

Very very catchy beat, i like it a lot.
Hook is okay, maybe you could of used 2 takes for seperate parts or somethin cause you can hear you strugglin to keep up with it. But it sounded pretty good.
First verse again a pretty damn good flow. Glad to see your acapella is a bit louder. Pretty good verse, no complaints here.
Flamez verse, sorry but after Chris' verse and hook you sound way too quiet. And i mean both quality wise and the way you're rapping. Your flow is pretty good though.
Third verse is a bit low at the start but gets decent volume after the first few lines.
Little mini-hook thing sounds alright, but a bit too quiet at parts.
It's all mixed fine, the hook is never off beat. I liked that echo thing on the end hook.
Who produced this beat?
I was glad to see Chris' quality go up on this track compared to Questions.
Flamez needs improvement, maybe he should do more solo tracks before featuring with artists? He had decent flow but he was a bit too quiet.
Overall: 7/10