(Verse redone)Intentions of rap - MC cubs ft. Vettori & Jrey

[Vettori]

Intentions of rap

NEW LINK ...MC CUBS"S VERSE REDONE

http://www.zshare.net/audio/3296219718b0be/


This track is going on cubs's mixtape..you can also here it on my myspace. http://www.myspace.com/pocketsMT

Took us about 12 hours in total to finish it all up.. But i'll say my favourite song ive done to date ....cubs did real good with keepin up on this one.... (mind the quality on cubs's verse is pretty decent we managed to blend it in quite well...But since our quality was really good..and his was still good but not as good...Thats why it sounds a little bit off...But big up's to Mc cubs...He heald his ground on this track


Verse 1 - Jreyez

Chorus- Vettori

Verse 2- Vettori

Verse 3- Mc cubs

since we did spend some time on this If you all could leave your honest feedback. It would be Much appreciated....and belive me this is somethin youll be playin over and over

"it's main idea is how rappers get looked at and pointed out differantly..and basically explains were normal people too...Just give it a listen ....and for anyone who's down for a serius collaboration, im workin on a mixtape myself and if your verse is good....and i mean Gooood...You can get a spot on it

"sounds like im gettin cocky but im not"

Ive decided to take this rap thing seriusly...I'll be droppin another track real soon as well its already done..as well im in the works of recording another one...which will probably be done tommorow
But some of these i have to keep on the mixtape...Ull get the odd track.. but the rest of the good shits stayin for the tape...Pce

[Vettori]

BUMPP !!!!!!!!!!

[Tash8]

its been less than an hour!

[Vettori]

didnt you just give a giant speech about feedback lol.....I'm impatient i know....woulda been nice if you left some feed tho.....and even if its been less then an hour...It had 11 views no comments ?...anyways Bump again

[Tash8]

didnt you just give a giant speech about feedback lol.....I'm impatient i know....woulda been nice if you left some feed tho.....and even if its been less then an hour...It had 11 views no comments ?...anyways Bump again

i'm going to feed it but i'm busy atm

i'll feed i promise, i like ur shit

btw that collab u did with big ax-d i'ma mix it 2morrow and send it to you and you can post it aite?

[Tash8]

here's my honest feed:

Intro you can't understand it....

Verse 1: flow is dope, lyrics are okay, wtf? overlays sound flangered

Chorus: ur singing is alright, but i noticed u panned it to both sides but you need one in the middle for it to work

Verse 2: flow is cool, but really your acapella sounds too unnatural, it's like u have 4 overlays on together..

Verse 3: Mc Cubz's breath noise could probably have been removed through EQ

overall: the song is cool, but it's not my favorite.. hook was the best part of the song

[Vettori]

in order to get rid of cubs's breath hewoulda had to re record it was mixed down into the vocals and he records without a pop filter.....

and thx for the feed....there is still a few things i have to learn...But each time i record i get better at it...I feel my delivery was ok..Not perfect but..People will get the point

thx tho

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

already left feed on myspace..haha
but track is nice... well done

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

verse 1 - sick flow, liked the lyrics alot, the lay overs or whatever the effect was was pretty dope aswell great verse

chorus - liked it

Verse 2 - this ones got a sick flow as well, probably on par with the first verses lyrics, great verse, prefered the first one though

Verse 3 - sick flow, the breathing ruins the effect of some of the lyrics, if that makes sense, but lyrics were very good


was a great track, with replay value, the breathing in cubz verse annoyed me coz it woulda been alot better if that wasnt there, but that wasnt anyones fault ya know, favourite verse was the first

keep it up guys


oh and the people who were in that thread about comparing forum artists to mainstream rap

1 song - 3 artist , all of the material on this track was way above most mainstream artists right now

[randomghost]

crazy song guys .....hook was crazy ..verses was hot from all ..speically Jreyez...good job guys ...and Vettori am lookin forward to collab wid ya...

[Vettori]

Thx everyone...yea small faults in it..but overall i like it :P .....the feedback does help...

Bar thx for that Much respect....and random ghost ..for sure like i said im down for collabs...Just all i ask is try to bring Your "A" game

PS: New version of thesong up...MC cubs redid his verse ima up it in a sec

[Kez]

Right listen

First, blanking out the producers name, not cool
I ought to grass you up to him

Anyway, i've used this beat for a song and i'm saying you did much better than me

1st Verse - I like your voice Jreyez you sound like Thomas
You flow real good i was bumpin my head
Lyrics are great
Your quality is great
Everything is just great

Hook - Like it, works good for the beat

2nd Verse (Vettori) - Again, flow's great
Some great lines and lyrics
"You're a rapper? Spit somethin, prove it"
One of the best lines i've heard so far imo

3rd Verse (Cubz) - Once again brilliant lines and flow
Great verse

This is a great song i agree with Bar this is mainstream quality shit
9.5/10 (i just can't give 10/10 for stuff haha)

Great job all of you

EDIT: Mixed up the fuckin verses

[Vettori]

Thx Kez...btw im second verse lol....jreyez is verse 1 but thx lol...And about the blanked out name Where it was in the beat it was annoying....so for the mixtape were gonna yell out his name in a better spot
this is just for ears atm

wasnt actually supposed to be relased lol....till the mixtape..But my impatient ass cant help it >.<


But for real thx for the feed

[Tash8]

what was redone who's verse?

[Vettori]

cubs's verse was redone...sounds alot better now..