another track: Thousand Times ( Produced by mart85)

[randomghost]

here is another other track from the album called: Thousand Times....the beat is free and produced by mart 85...am still workin on the album...it will drop it as soon as it done

track name: Thousand Times


Download:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/3412893c8ece0e/



feed will be much appreciated

[Tash8]

i'm not sure, where you tryin to tell a sad story /? your really need to change up ur voice for this one, ur emotion should be more calm and hoook was a bit annoying, thousand times, the other parts were sick but that was annoying, maybe you need to make it a lower pitch, but seriously this track u shoulda used a more calm voice cuz it would fit better...

[randomghost]

i'm not sure, where you tryin to tell a sad story /? your really need to change up ur voice for this one, ur emotion should be more calm and hoook was a bit annoying, thousand times, the other parts were sick but that was annoying, maybe you need to make it a lower pitch, but seriously this track u shoulda used a more calm voice cuz it would fit better...

i see where u hitting at i was just tryin to be more serious

[Kez]

I kind of agree with Tash, but the anger in the voice also works.

Anyway, i didn't really understand the idea of this track to be honest. But it still sounds good.

I thought the hook sounded fine, verses were good, but maybe you should make sure your voice sounds different on some tracks on your new tape, to stop you sounding the same each time.

But it's a good track, so 8/10

[Tash8]

i'm not sure, where you tryin to tell a sad story /? your really need to change up ur voice for this one, ur emotion should be more calm and hoook was a bit annoying, thousand times, the other parts were sick but that was annoying, maybe you need to make it a lower pitch, but seriously this track u shoulda used a more calm voice cuz it would fit better...

i see where u hitting at i was just tryin to be more serious

that's what i mean, the lyrics were serious, yet you had a joking type of voice + anger

u gotta have either a calm voice and tell it like a story or an anger low voice... or find your own style, but i'm saying the voice didn't work for this type of track...

i'd suggest rerecording it, cuz it had pretty cool lyrics..

[randomghost]

i'm not sure, where you tryin to tell a sad story /? your really need to change up ur voice for this one, ur emotion should be more calm and hoook was a bit annoying, thousand times, the other parts were sick but that was annoying, maybe you need to make it a lower pitch, but seriously this track u shoulda used a more calm voice cuz it would fit better...

i see where u hitting at i was just tryin to be more serious

that's what i mean, the lyrics were serious, yet you had a joking type of voice + anger

u gotta have either a calm voice and tell it like a story or an anger low voice... or find your own style, but i'm saying the voice didn't work for this type of track...

i'd suggest rerecording it, cuz it had pretty cool lyrics..

aight..i will see what everyone else thinks...i will try to record it again wid a calm voice

[mart85]

hmm yeah I also think it would be more effective with a calm voice, but it depends on what type of track you want to do... if that's the way you see it in your mind, that's fine too cause anger can fit too.. maybe a mix between a calm voice and an angry voice would be good I don't know lol.. like, you start with a calm voice, then during important lines you get "angrier" etc..

but lyrics were good... and I liked the hook ... I understand why Tash thought it got annoying, cause you repeated it often, but I didn't mind it

I think the track has potential

[randomghost]

hmm yeah I also think it would be more effective with a calm voice, but it depends on what type of track you want to do... if that's the way you see it in your mind, that's fine too cause anger can fit too.. maybe a mix between a calm voice and an angry voice would be good I don't know lol.. like, you start with a calm voice, then during important lines you get "angrier" etc..

but lyrics were good... and I liked the hook ... I understand why Tash thought it got annoying, cause you repeated it often, but I didn't mind it

I think the track has potential

thanx mart..much appreictaed

[Xray]

downloading feed soon

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

i like the hook aswell...didnt mind the repeatness...and lyrics were pretty nice
*sings hook*
nice track...keep it up and finish ur tape

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice lyrics not your strongest though

flow was kool though out again not your strongest, the delivery was different than id expect on that beat, it sorta works but i think it could have been alot better

id also recomend you re-record with a more layed back or maybe just less anger like delivery just to see how it sounds it could be better or worse ya know

didnt like the hook at all

[randomghost]

i like the hook aswell...didnt mind the repeatness...and lyrics were pretty nice
*sings hook*
nice track...keep it up and finish ur tape

thanx chris..much appreciated

nice lyrics not your strongest though

flow was kool though out again not your strongest, the delivery was different than id expect on that beat, it sorta works but i think it could have been alot better

id also recomend you re-record with a more layed back or maybe just less anger like delivery just to see how it sounds it could be better or worse ya know

didnt like the hook at all

thanxc bar...and yeah i will re-record it again...wid less angry voice...and thanx for the feed bro

[HAYZI]

i liekd this track, i liked the hook and didnt find it annoyin at all although after a few plays i might
i ejoyed the verses too they were very good but i also think u should calm ur voice a bit, not too much tho

[randomghost]

i liekd this track, i liked the hook and didnt find it annoyin at all although after a few plays i might
i ejoyed the verses too they were very good but i also think u should calm ur voice a bit, not too much tho

thanks man ...i will try to re-record the track again ..thanx for the feed

[B.A.D.]

my computer is bein a bitch these days

but as soon as I can download it,I will n will give u feed