First of all great collab choice
Bar's verse - Emotion in the verse is really good, some great lyrics and lines. Flow great. Love when you say nothin and it stops for a second, really great. Bar your delivery has really improved.
Hook - Brilliant, works great
Ax - Great lines in this verse, and flow too. Great verse what else can i say
Maybe - "Try to escape it but the devil outruns you" DAMN! Haha brilliant line
Maybe kills this, what more to say he's great as usual
Bar's other verse - Great just like the other one
Overall - Bar your delivery has really improved since your last track, that's the main improvement. Of course everythin else improved but delivery is easily the biggest improvement. Ax and Maybe keep their high standard as usual, all of you had some great lines, the concept i liked, and i'm glad to hear you're making a new EP Bar

9/10