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Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Oct 17th, '07, 05:22

Just speaking the real stuff..like always. Have a listen. Thank you


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Re: Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby Xray » Oct 17th, '07, 05:26

nice track man flow and lyrics on point altho the beat was too loud for the vocals
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Re: Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Oct 17th, '07, 05:32

Sajjad wrote:nice track man flow and lyrics on point altho the beat was too loud for the vocals


thank you : )..and im glad you said that..i was wondering the same thing about the beat being too loud...and i was actually hoping someone would say that just so i can make sure! now i can fix it... :y:
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Re: Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby Tash8 » Oct 17th, '07, 05:39

sick flow, beat's kick was really annoying.. make ur pella a LOT louder.

yo, btw do you record like 2 lines at once and then another 2 and another 2?
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Re: Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Oct 17th, '07, 05:49

Tash8 wrote:sick flow, beat's kick was really annoying.. make ur pella a LOT louder.

yo, btw do you record like 2 lines at once and then another 2 and another 2?


thanks! ..working on the pella now

Yes, I do somtimes..depending on how im gonna rap..when im rappin a a little faster my lines tend to go over the next line so i have to ...its very time consuming..cuz if i rap it at all at one time i'll be off beat
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Re: Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby $0 R3@L » Oct 17th, '07, 06:22

hmmm dont like when people patch up their verses like this....what happend to having flow and writing lyrics that are structured and composed correctly round the beat???

anyway it was a decent attempt,defo need to sort out the beat and vocal levels...
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Re: Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Oct 17th, '07, 06:31

$0 R3@L wrote:hmmm dont like when people patch up their verses like this....what happend to having flow and writing lyrics that are structured and composed correctly round the beat???

anyway it was a decent attempt,defo need to sort out the beat and vocal levels...


its kind of complicated for me though...i lay down on my stomach on my bed and rap on that crappy mic in my avatar...i can rap any of my songs without having to stop every couple of lines, its just hard for me to do because when i lay down in my short ass bed with my legs up in the air its uncomfortable..im probably the only dude that records like this its quite silly..i should take a pic..but i cant rap to my full potential without havin run out of breath or something because im puttin pressure on my stomach..i have no room to stand up and do what i do..so i just try to do whatever i can and accomplish as much as i can. i'd love to be in a studio where i can be in a more relaxed position and actually have room to move around..its hard gettin into the track ya know sometimes youd like to move your hand or whatever..try laying down and rappin on your bed..its hard..but hey, i cant afford studio time

anyway, I think I fixed it.

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Re: Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 17th, '07, 13:32

$0 R3@L wrote:hmmm dont like when people patch up their verses like this....what happend to having flow and writing lyrics that are structured and composed correctly round the beat???

anyway it was a decent attempt,defo need to sort out the beat and vocal levels...



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Re: Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby HAYZI » Oct 18th, '07, 00:27

i tink this is a great track, the way uve spat each line or two seperatly doesnt sound bad at all i think it sounds good and the overlays/adlibs sound great too. the hooks great layered well and uve got a good voice,

very good track keep it up
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Re: Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby Mc Cubz » Oct 19th, '07, 02:06

i quite liked it i rekon it wud b good if u did the verses all the way throu i.e. not a line at a time, if u dont know this - try n have the same no. syllables per line maintained for each few lines and leave out syllables every so often at which point u can breathe lol, hayzi's right ur voice is cool, could do with more voice projection and power but its cool, u can get that throu tryin to rap more forefully from ur lower respiratory passages, to sound more audible and convicting, nice track tho u have talent man,

p.s. if u have time id love to knw the effects u have used on ur voice even just the reverb etc lol, cos i quite like ur sound!
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Re: Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby Call Me Pik » Oct 19th, '07, 03:02

the track was good but i didnt like the hook
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Re: Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Oct 19th, '07, 04:02

Thank you Pik and Mc Cubz

Mc Cubz, yeah I know that but I like saying my full sentences without having to take any words out. Because off this I would rap off beat that's why I did it 2 lines by 2 lines so I can fully say what I wanted to say. I don't wanna take words out. But this is just one out of maybe 3 tracks I've done like that so it's whatever. Thanks, I know what you mean by more power in my voice, but I've tried it and it's hard because of the way I record. Since I lay out my stomach when I try to put more power into my voice it doesn't work I guess cuz I'm putting pressure on my stomach lol..but I'm gonna try what you saying about lower messages..I appreciate what you have to say. :y:

Okay, these are the effects I used. Depending on how you want it you can mess with the settings..but I use

Amplitude > Dynamics Processing > RealAudio
Filter > Parametic Equalizer > Mackie Mid (Cut)
Delay Effect > Reverb > Tight & Close
I used a Noise Reduction and also Hiss Reduction > High Hiss Reduction
I used the hiss reduction because my microphone gives off a terribly bad hiss in the background..it removes it completely.
and an Echo if you'd like

As for the chorus..it did basically the same thing except the following
Chorus > 5 Voices
Graphic Equalizer Vocal Prescence
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Re: Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby Tash8 » Oct 19th, '07, 06:52

u should never use a the same thing on every acapella, cuz some pellas need something else and some might not need some of the stuff u said.
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Re: Feels Like It Was Yesterday

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Oct 21st, '07, 00:07

Tash8 wrote:u should never use a the same thing on every acapella, cuz some pellas need something else and some might not need some of the stuff u said.


i just took it from here http://www.quazen.com/Arts/Music/Mixing ... -Pro.28285

like i said, i dont know what the hell im doing when it comes to effects
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