(NEW)Vettori - (Livin 2 Die)

[Vettori]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/4358021e8b736b/

Third verse was Lowered in volume on purpose btw.....

anyways hope you all enjoy, my mixtape is gonna be droppin soon, still no Date....But im still workin on some things.... But heres sumthin for yall to just relax too....My most serius song to date

And This is all me ..Im on the chorus, and all the verses

Plz leave feed

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

hmm i think the vocal-volume could be raised overall....
and the hook is the best part man.... really kool
and lyrics are dope too
'nother great track man

[Tash8]

man this is dope..good job

did you double your whole verses btw? if you did, i t hink you shouldn't, it makes ur vocals sound muddy.

[Vettori]

I recorded it once, and i adlibbed it once....so it was More original...i didnt double up on the hole thing....My voice does have some raspyness to it, when i normally talk....cant help that....But thanks for the feedback guys

[Vettori]

u can
See us walkin the Line
You can run right now But got no-where -to -hide
We take reason into Livin our lives
Were breathin right now, but were all -Livin- to diiiee


Seeein Death around the corner, Theres lots more to it
Pac's death administrated, Where fairness aint included
Pops up in the news everyday who's been killed
Kids soakin this up, there role models takin pills
School systems bullshit, why kids gotta fake sick
Why teens havin children ,cant afford them yet
Alotta why's Unsolved murders suicide Kills
try lookin at the real You and I gettin chills
Thinkin on a new level Intentions of rap
The real settlement its Intervention Minds in tact
Practical to pretend But your heads playin facts
Lie to the rest But the truth stays back
someone else will catch it, along as it rolls
I'm to young to be takin to heart so i know
But now i think fuck it, a release i can show
At least if I Pass More can come when i go

{ Verse 2 }

Burried not as a celebrity, But as i grew up
My many memorys changed, Up and poofed in the dust
were well Suited with these guns, lower funds yea were fucked
almost as if someone's runnin, packs of ice on our nuts
Secrets all swallowed somehow they think they wont budge
Goes to show how incredible your Thick system runs
All these Fit descriptions, they all lead back to one
we sit and slave wonders for Those we dont want
salvage to make money and provide for our kids
So that we can make them do the same shit that we did
have a constant ring of insanity handed lifes Gift
probably fry out jailed, or watchin there life strip
drugs experimented with,Theyll start feelin deprived
Blame everything around, hit 50 your Tired
take it how you want, You can say that you tried
all your time was waisted waiting just living to die

I can sense a sentimental value in the history of rap
Ages ago spat by generations, the formats
Changed drastically started off bad
got stronger hit the strongest
The line flattened tupac passed,
Biggie passed now its back to back tracks
relapsed crap we cant grasp
what the fuk ever happened to serius lyrics
Mysteriously witch crafted now its laughed at
Fact Theres a lot less traphic, this assesment is mastered
Track spun bastard who packs sumthin in store for all you rap has beens
My actions acted told you when im back i was gonna smash
every chance i grab trash everyone that spat
and decided to infatuate me with that,
of which i had no clue not thoughts and little time to react
practically swooped off my feet no fleet carries my treatment
Being pissed at the world aint a disease it's barily even

[DelinQuent]

like whoever said i think the overall vocals should come up a bit in volume. i loved the hook, the verses were a tiny bit hard to understand but they were good. dope shit, i wouldn't mind doing a track with you.

[HAYZI]

hooks real nice man, verses are pretty good, nice work keep workin man im lookin forward to ur tape

[Vettori]

Thx alot guys....I wasnt gonna release this just yet, but i can never hold onto them... anyways it goes appreciated..... Thx

[Robbie G]

Nice dude, I liked it.

[Vettori]

Thx :P

[Tash8]

i've been bumping this eshh nonstop man, dope as fuck!

[Phantom]

man this is dope..good job

did you double your whole verses btw? if you did, i t hink you shouldn't, it makes ur vocals sound muddy.

i dont think you know what muddy truly is tash lol..

your vocals sound real clear, u cant judge quality of a verse from headphones, the sound is just to different

anyways...flow was good, hook was real good, lyrics were cool..

these kinda songs are always usually good no exception for this one..

good job man

[Tash8]

that would make sense, cuz i alway listen thru my headphone? u think that could be the problem? cuz i always hear vocals muddly so i figured it's just the quality?

[Vettori]

Thx alot Both of you :P haha Im gonna lay off those serius tracks for a bit, There wil be more, But ima just start goin with how im feelin...so maybe a few more hyped tracks...But On a more mainstream level...I wanna try Making something that would sound good on the radio :P...thx again guys respect

[Tash8]

Thx alot Both of you :P haha Im gonna lay off those serius tracks for a bit, There wil be more, But ima just start goin with how im feelin...so maybe a few more hyped tracks...But On a more mainstream level...I wanna try Making something that would sound good on the radio :P...thx again guys respect

i know u want to fit in with mainstream/radio, but u got skill, don't ruin it by having bad concepts like what's on mainstream now a days.