When My Time Comes W/ Linkin Park

[dbeauluvswomen]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/57557046c55e7

Artist: D-Beau
Song: When My Time Comes
Produced By: Sinima

It's basically a little story of mine..things that run through my mind at times..

[slim sherif]

Dope Track

[Kez]

Beat's good
Verses have good flow and lyrics, a bit low, and the delivery sometimes sounds a bit quiet
Hook is alright

Overall 8/10

[dbeauluvswomen]

I appreciate the feed Kez and Slim!

Edit: Nevermind

[Kez]

I appreciate the feed Kez and Slim!

If I give someone my verses in acapella form could somebody maybe mix it for me?

Depends what you mean by mix. Elaborate.

[dbeauluvswomen]

I appreciate the feed Kez and Slim!

If I give someone my verses in acapella form could somebody maybe mix it for me?

Depends what you mean by mix. Elaborate.

Edit: Got it

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i really like this track, the concept n content is all good n i enjoy it, the lyrics are great with good rhymes ect. and meaningful, the flow is sick aswell and you prounounce everything to the point i understand it all and with fast spitters thats the catch 22 they get, they can go fast all they want if i dont understand i dont care, but i undertood this all and ejoyed it, the beat is great and sample is used well, i dont like the part at the end were it goes full into rock whoever made the beat didnt mix that in very well imo and should have left it out.

other than that great track and keep it up man, you got skills

[dbeauluvswomen]

i really like this track, the concept n content is all good n i enjoy it, the lyrics are great with good rhymes ect. and meaningful, the flow is sick aswell and you prounounce everything to the point i understand it all and with fast spitters thats the catch 22 they get, they can go fast all they want if i dont understand i dont care, but i undertood this all and ejoyed it, the beat is great and sample is used well, i dont like the part at the end were it goes full into rock whoever made the beat didnt mix that in very well imo and should have left it out.

other than that great track and keep it up man, you got skills

haha yeah I don't care for the rock part at the end either...actually when that hook comes on the second time I change the song lmao

thanks for the feed! ..the lyrics mean a lot to me personally so it wasnt hard to put the pen to the pad. Appreciate it much!