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Postby Enimee » Dec 25th, '07, 06:16

on camrons rocky beat horrid quality and a lil shaky at times with flow but here it is
on the rocky beat.mp3 - 4.30MB
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Re: freestyle

Postby Enimee » Dec 26th, '07, 03:13

feedback plz
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Re: freestyle

Postby DelinQuent » Dec 26th, '07, 05:52

you should make an actual song, you have a solid voice, but half of those words make zero sense, you're jumping around too much, trying too hard to rhyme.
keep workin, make an actual song.
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