Hurt- DelinQuent

[DelinQuent]

http://www.soundclick.com/delinquent
brand new, recorded not even an hour ago. mixed myself
beat by sinima at http://www.soundclick.com/sinima

feedback=love

[B.A.D.]

cool beat, I'm feelin it

the quality is perfect, but your voice sounds a lil' bassy lols, nothing to worry bout, still, the verse 1 is hot, lyrics and concept is str8 murda mayn, @ the hook, damnz its hot, real nice verse 2, prolly better than the first one, really feelin this track, again u do murda with the style, whoa, its real real nice, loving this one, verse 3 is amazing too, but not as good as verse 2, still the whole concept of the track is real real nice, u gotta do a fuckin tape man!!,

another great murda from DQ, good job mate

[DelinQuent]

lyrics, some variation

it started when i was young, i mean i was dumb/
the relationship was fuckin, so it all mean nothing/
but to me it meant somethin, cause it scarred me for life/
and i'll never know why, my trust started dyin/
look you in the face ya lyin, lookin in the mirror cryin/
thinkin is it cause i'm ugly?, that this bitch don't love me?/
why's it that she's fuckin, all my closest friends/
but they don't know no better, cause we kept it to eachother/
was a secret just between us, she was everything i needed/
minus lyin and the cheatin, i said fuck it cause i'm leavin/
but i couldn't build the courage, so i just kept on hurtin/
thinkin someday it'll work and, maybe she can change/
so i held on everyday, and i dealt with her abuse/
hopin she would call a truce, i already knew the truth/
this lyin cheatin bitch, sucked my bestfriends dick/
i can't help but to think, but the thought makes me sick/

from that point on, i knew i would be strong/
i ain't know i would be scarred, see relationships are hard/
i can't bring myself to care, is there anyone out there/
who feels the same way, as the tears run down their face/
cause they push their friends away, and force themselves alone/
lonely at home, only one knows/
cause the only one who cares, stares back in the mirror/
still can't see this shit clear, living life in fear/
holdin onto no one dear, push the ones who love away/
can i love another day?, can i ever fuckin change/
to my other old ways?, look for love all day/
empty handed always, no more high school hallways/
theses days are hard days, tryin to find my soul mate/
but i'm easily frustrated, so i push em all away then/
kick myself later, see ya later alligator/
gotta find out who i am, maybe then i'll give a damn/

fuck this shit i quit, yo to all my loved ones/
you might only love once, try not to be dumb/
don't do like i did, and throw away the best things/
love means insevtment, somethin i could never grasp/
so i acted like an ass, and broke a couple hearts/
if i could go back to the start, yeah with everything i did/
i wouldn't change a thing, it's a lesson for the kids/
who don't know what blessings is, you can feel it in the lips/
in the kiss when you touch, words never mean much/
lifes been too tough, i'm sick of bein fucked/
it makes me scared to jump, and open up my heart/
so i go on in the dark, and i push away/
everythang, no love no hug/
i need no one, i told ya'll i'm done/
and i mean it when i say, i'll never be the same/
i'm just sick of all the games, so now i'm leave peace/

thanks for the feed ax, it's well appreciated

[Speech]

concepts is pretty deep...you opening up
quality to mee : perfect
cool delivery ..sometimes scary pronnounciation
beat was just a lil ironic to me, having a girl on the hook..well that was the beat so not your fault (maybe i'm the only one being bothered by a girl in your hook lmao)
but all nice, enjoyed it..not like listening to the first part and feel like closing the internet explorer so cool (<--- no mistake you getting two dumbs up haha)

liked it.....8.9 / 10 nice job buddy

[DelinQuent]

good lookin out, glad to hear you enjoyed it. i just thought about the female hook, and yes it is ironic lol.

[Enimee]

beat wqas too hard lyrics were ite not to deep but i felt the emotion flow was off but only in the start of first and last verse so it was ite great shyt bro keep it up

[DelinQuent]

thanks for the honest feed. i'll work on those next time