NEW Unknown soldiers Vet,Nef,Reyez

by **Vettori** » Dec 27th, '07, 19:05

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5954790a664f40/

Im verse 1 and chorus

Nef is second

reyez third

by **DelinQuent** » Dec 27th, '07, 20:54

i used that beat... check my song at http://www.soundclick.com/delinquent lol
EDIT-the song i made is called "What I Say"

liked the 1st versem lyrics were solid, delivery too.
2nd verse was good as well...
3rd verse, i wasn't feelin it. idk what it was.
solid song tho. great job 8/10

by **Tash8** » Dec 27th, '07, 21:35

sick!

First verse was sick, hook was great

Second verse would have been good if he didn't completely bite off of Eminen's 8 mile road

Third verse was alright

by **Kez** » Dec 27th, '07, 22:05

Great song

First verse, brilliant shit i thought, great lyrics and flow :y:

Second verse, i didn't think he bit 8 Mile Road tbh, but there were similiarities i'll admit. Still, lyrics and flow were good

Third verse, alright lyrics, pretty simple rhymes though. Flow's good

Hook's nice too

I liked it :y:

by **Enimee** » Dec 27th, '07, 23:36

OMG do u really have to keep comin so sick with this rap shyt dog on some realness this is like better then most shyt u see on mtv and bet combined no shytin

by **Vettori** » Dec 28th, '07, 03:20

Lol thx glas you all enjoyed it...appreciated

by **Mc Cubz** » Dec 28th, '07, 17:50

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow

this is tr not dr dre' studio

wht u playin at u crazy mo fo, better than nefin out there man, Id buy a cd of this shit before modern mobb deep or nething

one thing - ur hook is good but it isnt as catchy as in other hooks i herd u do e.g. intentions of rap

all 3 sound good first 2 are sick as hell i rekon jreyez is good but he shud do a club song cos his voice suits it like i cud neva do a club track reli, tht voice is perfect for it, tell him to go and murk soilja boy, nef has a unconventional style guy like finishes early and pauses at ends of bars - well thts how it appears to me, but its maintained throuought the verse its not a mistake, all of u are too sick man, make ur tape and send it sony!

by **Vettori** » Dec 28th, '07, 18:13

Thx alot man :P appreciate it

by **Jay-19** » Dec 28th, '07, 18:32

Enimee wrote:OMG do u really have to keep comin so sick with this rap shyt dog on some realness this is like better then most shyt u see on mtv and bet combined no shytin

I agree to the fullest! This song is so motherfucking good I can't stop listen to it. No shit!

The first and second verse are the best, but Reyez ain't bad either. But there's more feeling in the other two. Hook is also great, you really knows how to make hooks that stays in your head. Overall a very very very good track. You get a 9/10, because I wish the song was longer than it is. :y:

You gon' blow up dude, I tell you that because I truly believe it!

by **Vettori** » Dec 28th, '07, 18:41

Thx alot man, I really like hearin that kinda feed...makes recording worth it..Thx to everyone who Commented...Ima try make my next track better then the last

btw check out Thank god im alive, its posted somewhere below this one...Im on the melodic parts...I messed up a few times...But overall songs heavenly....leave some feed on it, we wanna know what ppl think :P

by **Speech** » Dec 28th, '07, 23:18

hahahahaha! i used that beat too..hated the track and destroyed everything that had to do with it (no i didn cut off my arms :zipped:

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nice one man..liked it..didn like reyez's verse too much...he can do better..i checked out his last tape and heard better...oh well second verse was da bomb, flow and delivery was pretty tight...first verse also flawless :y: