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Random Ghost Ft. Big Axd - Our Journey (produced by me)

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Random Ghost Ft. Big Axd - Our Journey (produced by me)

Postby randomghost » Jan 1st, '08, 21:09

am not really good at producin..but am still doin ma thing yoo....THIS SONG IS NOT FROM THE THOUSAND TIMES ALBUM...its just something showing that am still here...as for the album is done but am still watin verses from others...it will be released soon....ma voice might not sound that clear coz am havin trouble wid mastering....lol....anyways..here is the link:


http://www.zshare.net/audio/6090566243c99d/


feed will be appreciated....and people feed the beat...thanx :happy:
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Re: Random Ghost Ft. Big Axd - Our Journey (produced by me)

Postby Speech » Jan 2nd, '08, 20:34

cool shit alltogether man....well to be honest homie, that beat ..eeeeeeh :n: ..it had flow tho so it's not the worst shit i've heard :y: ...your verse was cool...pretty simple, but it had the facts and shout outs...cool shit....so uhm..ax-d...verse killed it i think...just that the quality killed me lol..clear, but the hissing or however to call it caused me a life time ear cancer lol, but the lyrics was above average boi :y:
hmm nothing i'd bump 5 times a day but it was worth listening :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Random Ghost Ft. Big Axd - Our Journey (produced by me)

Postby Mc Cubz » Jan 3rd, '08, 01:09

wow makin ur own beats sick lol

beat was real simple
i fink ur better at hooks than verses mayb work on rhythm and being bang on beat all the time in ur verses will help u get abit stronger ther as always feelin the unique style and voice tht wud b missed random

the start wer u say random productions is funy as fuk lol

il comment on the track as a whole i.e. meaning wen my cpmuter lets me listen to the whole song being reli slow atm mate! :b:
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Re: Random Ghost Ft. Big Axd - Our Journey (produced by me)

Postby randomghost » Jan 4th, '08, 19:51

Speech wrote:cool shit alltogether man....well to be honest homie, that beat ..eeeeeeh :n: ..it had flow tho so it's not the worst shit i've heard :y: ...your verse was cool...pretty simple, but it had the facts and shout outs...cool shit....so uhm..ax-d...verse killed it i think...just that the quality killed me lol..clear, but the hissing or however to call it caused me a life time ear cancer lol, but the lyrics was above average boi :y:
hmm nothing i'd bump 5 times a day but it was worth listening :y: :y: :y:
thanx spizzy :worship: much appreciated :flower:



Mc Cubz wrote:wow makin ur own beats sick lol

beat was real simple
i fink ur better at hooks than verses mayb work on rhythm and being bang on beat all the time in ur verses will help u get abit stronger ther as always feelin the unique style and voice tht wud b missed random

the start wer u say random productions is funy as fuk lol

il comment on the track as a whole i.e. meaning wen my cpmuter lets me listen to the whole song being reli slow atm mate! :b:
lol..thanx man...people say that i sound like ken kaniff at the beginning of this song..haha..anyways thanx for the feed..i think the beat was a bit hard for me to flow on....thanx again :worship:
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Re: Random Ghost Ft. Big Axd - Our Journey (produced by me)

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 4th, '08, 22:41

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Re: Random Ghost Ft. Big Axd - Our Journey (produced by me)

Postby Ethos » Jan 5th, '08, 01:12

okay. let me see. I actually enjoyed the delivery. verse were so so. not the best i've heard. but you must get tired of hearing that a lot. lol. The beat though...... hurts my ears lol. it's just too empty feeling to me. if you want the lyrics to be more powerful then you must have a beat that will at least come close to that same strength as the vocals. I'm not gonna go in detail cuz i'm sure you know what i mean. ;)

all in all i give this a 7.5/10. :smoking: great job both of you
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Re: Random Ghost Ft. Big Axd - Our Journey (produced by me)

Postby randomghost » Jan 5th, '08, 19:09

Syanied wrote:okay. let me see. I actually enjoyed the delivery. verse were so so. not the best i've heard. but you must get tired of hearing that a lot. lol. The beat though...... hurts my ears lol. it's just too empty feeling to me. if you want the lyrics to be more powerful then you must have a beat that will at least come close to that same strength as the vocals. I'm not gonna go in detail cuz i'm sure you know what i mean. ;)

all in all i give this a 7.5/10. :smoking: great job both of you
i got what u mean....i have an EP comin out after Thousand Times...all beats will be produced by me .....i made many better beats...thanx for the feed anyway :flower:
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Re: Random Ghost Ft. Big Axd - Our Journey (produced by me)

Postby Tash8 » Jan 5th, '08, 20:51

alright;

Song:
Lyrics were cool, delievery was nice, overall both your verses were nice..

Beat:

the mixing is your main problem first of all, in the hook you can't even hear the drums... and the piano is louder than your drums :sweating: like mart was telling me, if your gonna leave it empty like that then make you drums louder a lot like dre beats... overall not a great beat to use..
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Re: Random Ghost Ft. Big Axd - Our Journey (produced by me)

Postby randomghost » Jan 8th, '08, 21:31

Tash8 wrote:alright;

Song:
Lyrics were cool, delievery was nice, overall both your verses were nice..

Beat:

the mixing is your main problem first of all, in the hook you can't even hear the drums... and the piano is louder than your drums :sweating: like mart was telling me, if your gonna leave it empty like that then make you drums louder a lot like dre beats... overall not a great beat to use..
thanx man.. :happy: about the beat..yeah i think the drums in the hook was kinda low :sweating: anyways i learned and i got better powerful beats....thanx for the feed :flower:
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