a new verse

[stevethetruth]

found this on my comp, haven't been recording lately due to laziness lol

ignore the wack mixing, i mixed it so yeah don't expect perfect i tried lol
this was recorded in august i believe

http://www.zshare.net/audio/62278640828d4a/

all feed appreciated

[Tash8]

nice flow, pronounciation could use a bit of work

but overall pretty cool verse

great beat by mart as well

[B.A.D.]

I have that beat too lol

the mixing its not that all bad still there's no hiss and stuff, so its ok

the lyrics is good, very good, the flow is good all matched on the beat

good verse mayn, I liked it

nice ta see ya rapping again

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

about ur flow it was on beat but pretty boring... and idk somthin about ur voice...
i didnt ENJOY listening but it was definitly worth it
and mixing isnt too bad...pronouncation-wise its was pretty ok...could be improved but nobody is perfect
keep 'em comin

[DelinQuent]

yeah you need to pronounce better. flow was ok. work on your delivery is all i can tell ya.
keep working. good job

EDIT-do you think you could PM me that beat by chance?

[mart85]

yeah like it's been said, pronounciation/delivery could have been better a little, but it was better than your first stuff, so that was an improvement...lyrics and flow were nice... so keep it up and stop being lazy lol

and thanks for using my beat lol

(DQ, you can download it on my soundclick, it's the one called A Thousand Times)

[DelinQuent]

thanks mart, the whole time i was scouring soundclick looking for a mark 45 lmfao

[Phantom]

thanks mart, the whole time i was scouring soundclick looking for a mark 45 lmfao

thats not funny and its stupid


but steve like everyone else said, work on delivery and youll be good.

[stevethetruth]

thanks `for all the feed guys didn't think i would get this much since i haven't posted in a while lol
if anyone needs feed on anything let me know