NEW Lil M - Sincerely Your Son (Prod By Lil M)

[Rapsoldier101]

lil m - sincerely your son.mp3 - 9.41MB



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[Nu Syd]

aye i dont like the beat,but whats with the cassidy sounding flow man, i heard you before but you sound different here like your tryna push a cassidy voice. Besides that, not bad stay up. Honest feed

[Tash8]

u gotta be kidding me?

u used the kick/snare/hat sounds that originally came with fl studio?

thhat sounds horrible, beat isn't that great... stuff comes in randomly and goes away randomly, drum sounds are horrible. beat is just ehhhhhh

song, u put way to much reverb on ur vocals...

i'll stop here.

[soperman005]

the beats alright..
lyrics are really moving and impressive flow..
the echo effect on the vocals really creates a ghostly sound that works well with the eerie beat.

overall it was very good and it makes me wanna make a song like this.

[DelinQuent]

eh, i wasn't feeling it. the beat just completely seperated me from the track. the vocals were too quiet. idk what to say about the hook, just didnt like it.
maybe a 6/10

EDIT-i didn't mean to sound like a hater. just keep doing your thing and stay honest.

[B.A.D.]

beat is not that bad, matta fact I kinda liked it, so good job on the beat

u need an intro

the flow works pretty well, and the deep lyrics are very very good, the track is real and thats something good, on a "south-flow" type voice, the deep tracks are something not seen often, but damn the lyrics are too strong to be sharing... hope you ain't lien bout that cuz its very very personal, but well I don't really wanna get into that

the quality is not good, but you can still listen to it in a good way

but, keep working, nice track

[Rapsoldier101]

beat is not that bad, matta fact I kinda liked it, so good job on the beat

u need an intro

the flow works pretty well, and the deep lyrics are very very good, the track is real and thats something good, on a "south-flow" type voice, the deep tracks are something not seen often, but damn the lyrics are too strong to be sharing... hope you ain't lien bout that cuz its very very personal, but well I don't really wanna get into that

the quality is not good, but you can still listen to it in a good way

but, keep working, nice track

yea unfortunatly everything in this song is true, but thanks, to you everyone else for the feed

[Speech]

since i read the feedback first i was desperatly seeking for cassidy flow....ok i gotta say that i didn find it too often maybe a coupla bars that sounded cass like but that didn go for the whole song so it's ok...i mean ppl use a lil something of somebody...wasn as bad as your other song that i posted to.

the concepts..i don think they are too deep to be shared...not a great story but it had it's decent deepness...idk i live in a smilirar situation (dad gone etc.) so i can relate, ppl who don't, prolly won't(or can't) feel this song...i liked it and the way you had coupla things together...cool

the beat...uuuuuuuuuhm nope ...not bad bad...but bad lol.....you should have bought yourself a real pro beat somewhere, i mean you couldn say the "that i made this beat" line...but ayo you a lyricist you can find something to replace that

quality..uuuuuuuhm(lol).....well i heard worse...you had trax out that raped my speakers cuz the quality was so wack, this one was much better...the echoe thing didn work out for me idk ...just sounded too echoey

well my points

-cut the cassidy in general
-try to get a better mic or even a pop filter(or wait... you used one on this ?)
-keep the lyrics up tho
-leave the beat making to pros or...try harder and sit down longer for a beat (duno how long it took you for that lol)
-continue rappin you have potential just use your talent right and don chill on on what you can do now

peace

[Wonderbread]

This is pretty tight! I like you flow and the lyrics are tight. Reminds me of a cross between Stan by Em and Right Now by Fort Minor. The only thing is I thought the beat got a little boring.