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Ghostride My Mercedes

Postby soperman005 » Jan 22nd, '08, 05:03

Miko feat. Sopa Dope
"Ghostride My Mercedes" (Prod. by Sopa Dope)

grmsopmik_1.mp3 - 1.26MB

It's my first actual song. I made the beat and let my friend rap over it, and then I added my verse later. Mine is the second one. Feel free to download it and bump it in your car. Being that I live in the valley, the song is about ghostriding and is a club banger. I know I don't give out a lot of feedback with you other rappers on this forum, but I'd be willing to and would be much more motivated after recieving some feedback. Thanks for your time.
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Re: Ghostride My Mercedes

Postby Speech » Jan 22nd, '08, 11:25

song was cool..i expected worse lol nah kiddin.....cool shit you made there...it's a club banger...still the lyrics was decent..liked that...and all together...it sounded like you had alot of fun putting this together..didn get boring...nice :y:
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Re: Ghostride My Mercedes

Postby Johnny Quid » Jan 22nd, '08, 15:07

NICE....VERY NICE... :y:
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Re: Ghostride My Mercedes

Postby DelinQuent » Jan 22nd, '08, 17:45

not my type of song. the guy who comes in at 1:38 didn't have enough delivery. it sounded like he was bored of himself. not bad tho. good job
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Re: Ghostride My Mercedes

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 23rd, '08, 00:28

beat is great

banguin is great

I love club bangas

just work on the quality of the mastering and you got a genious piece there
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Re: Ghostride My Mercedes

Postby soperman005 » Jan 23rd, '08, 03:37

thanks a lot for the feedback
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Re: Ghostride My Mercedes

Postby Mc Cubz » Jan 24th, '08, 00:53

not bad the beat and the vocals didnt seem to powerful maybe use a stronger beat and either compression on the voice/harder rappin
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