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Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby Xray » Feb 4th, '08, 07:09

Title: Automatic Murder
Album: The Dark Days EP
Produced By: X-Ray & Tash8 Productions
Mixed By: Tash8 Productions
Year: 2008
Lyrics:

[verse 1]
we bring crowns posion sounds motherf***er were spectacular
blood spilling massacre drink blood like dracula
put you in your mamas hole and pour in cement
if you f***en faggots ever try to follow where we went
thats why i, breathe in the music knowledge and data
to make my brain fatter till my f***en brain shatter
i will keep shittin and rippin cause we dont need led
cause i keep it visious to you bi***es till you rip and shred
i twist hands 360 degrees back till you cry for mercy
have your mama's milk cummin out your mouth superbly
you faggots spit sperm cause you faggots mouth function
i came straight from hell so the dungeon is my junction
i infect till your dead im like a f***en virus
im the lighter of darkness i destroy survivors
kill these pricks before they slip cause i love the silence
carpet snakes all around me all i see is pythons
im hated, im the one you wouldn't mention
spray my venom in your veins till i see an infection
i used to be like you till i learned the basics
now its night shifts of music till my tongue slips
we all started out crappy but your smell is getting worse
your cursed, out my ass your the first to burst
you should be crowned deputy of my butt cause you smell
see i'll eat these cats alive and you can send them to hell
i dry out challenges like humidity
now me getting signed thats a possibility
cause in a thich wooden skull theirs small capacity
but in a brain like mine theirs methods and strategy
a self made clown couldn't entertain folks
cause a self made clown is full of them lame jokes
on killer beats i cope so guns won't be needed
and if i got no money than i defantely steal it

[chorus]
when we ride when we ride its homicide to your life
its suicide suicide cause our name's bring the fright
spit dramatic, finger static were really quick to hurt ya
cause when, tash and I collab, it's automatic murder
we survive we survive everyday through technique
and we revive we revive our bright voices when we speak
make choices to seek, you make noises to peak
cause you struggle we don't thats why we never act weak

[verse 2]
you play, dodgy motherf***er i grab life by the balls
squeeze for no cause till the f***en blood pours
i make wounds look tasty the zombies are waiting
you get horror strucked, f***ed till your body start aching
for every bloodshed your homies get frustrated end up mustard
cause its a feed on another breed that i must get
yea pain to the brain is my daily process
devilish moments ate my emotions
thoughts swim in oceans don't really care about skins
fishing for some dolphins cause tuna really stinks
eyes try to glimpse when things take effect
the sun wanna battle me i ain't scared of shit
i look at him straight till his eyes reflect
ima show him the real me cause i ain't perfect
pretty boy wanna go ima show him i don't swet
ima walk on the sun like a f***en reject
stressed everyday but i survive through my myseries
live with difficulties, looking for my remedies
im that kid, the one they call a stranger
i still care less for cash im the dungeons remainder
im, living next to pipes, they us flawless mics
people they love to diss us cause theyre stressed from fights
so they, pick-ON whos tough, thinking i gotta chance
we play easy not rough cause our shit's advance
i rule my sh*** here i'm picollo from namek
when tash is on the beat its a worldwide panic
worldwide damage so its hard for you to run
im crowned spitter of the month, your the junkiest of punks
you creep low with chumps left to get pissed on
leave you in a steep hole, and no one will miss yall
so checkity check yourself before you wreck yourself
Cause S.A and tash is bad for your health

[chorus]
when we ride when we ride its homicide to your life
its suicide suicide cause our name's bring the fright
spit dramatic, finger static were really quick to hurt ya
cause when, tash and I collab, it's automatic murder
we survive we survive everyday through technique
and we revive we revive our bright voices when we speak
make choices to seek, you make noises to peak
cause you struggle we don't thats why we never act weak

[outro]
S.A. and Tash Productions, 2008
The Dark Days EP coming soon


Links:
Soundclick: http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6234594
Myspace: http://www.myspace.com/3ems3cees

First Single From Upcomming EP (The Dark Days EP) Which Is A Combination Of Tash & SaJJad..Executive Producer Is Tash 8..So Please Leave Feed On Both Production And Mixing...Much Appreciated.

Copyright: United Rhymers Division/Flawless Mics
Last edited by Xray on Feb 4th, '08, 08:17, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby randomghost » Feb 4th, '08, 07:14

nice beat...great mixing....nice lyrics....keep doin u thang tash...lookin forward to the EP SA :y:
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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby Xray » Feb 4th, '08, 07:17

randomghost wrote:nice beat...great mixing....nice lyrics....keep doin u thang tash...lookin forward to the EP SA :y:


thanks bro glad you enjoyed it :worship:
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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby DelinQuent » Feb 4th, '08, 07:35

whoaaaa LOVED the chorus. the lyrics were great. some great rhymes in there. beat was great, mixing as well.
i'll give this a 9/10 because you need a new mic lol
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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby Xray » Feb 4th, '08, 08:08

DelinQuent wrote:whoaaaa LOVED the chorus. the lyrics were great. some great rhymes in there. beat was great, mixing as well.
i'll give this a 9/10 because you need a new mic lol

thanks bro glad you like what you heard and yea im trynna save up for a new mic thanks again bro :worship:

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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby Vettori » Feb 4th, '08, 17:02

This is probably the best song ive heard from yu, great delivery...and the beat was real sick....Slightly suttle, but Was definatly good. Chorus coulda been Delivered better...But over all I like it...Felt like it had some dim feeling to the hole thing....like the energy wasn't there...But eh one more thing to improve on

"thanks bro glad you like what you heard and yea im trynna save up for a new mic thanks again bro"

Its not about the mic, its about how well its mixed...and this was mixed pretty good anyways i dont feel there was much problem with the quality.....Get like a 40 dollar mic and ull be good to go
Just alot of artists feel like its all about the mic and thats gonna save them yanno...either get an engineer or Learn to mix Its fairly simple to be honest....But anyways again Nice track keep at it :b:
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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby Tash8 » Feb 4th, '08, 22:04

Thanks for the feed everyone!!!

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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby Xray » Feb 4th, '08, 22:52

Vettori wrote:This is probably the best song ive heard from yu, great delivery...and the beat was real sick....Slightly suttle, but Was definatly good. Chorus coulda been Delivered better...But over all I like it...Felt like it had some dim feeling to the hole thing....like the energy wasn't there...But eh one more thing to improve on

thanks and glad you enjoyed it..if your talking about theres no energy in verse 1 well thats wat i was thinking too..so EP version verse 1 will be rerecorded..cause i ain't happy with it too :y:

Vettori wrote:Its not about the mic, its about how well its mixed...and this was mixed pretty good anyways i dont feel there was much problem with the quality.....Get like a 40 dollar mic and ull be good to go
Just alot of artists feel like its all about the mic and thats gonna save them yanno...either get an engineer or Learn to mix Its fairly simple to be honest....But anyways again Nice track keep at it :b:

yep you're right and just to let you know i did't mix this..my usuall songs have better sounding quality on the acapellas..its just that i wanted tash to mix this song and give it a new different feeling than my usual tracks.. which did a great job on it (thanks again tash)....so i might re-master the acapellas myself on the EP version we'll see.. and reason why i said i need to buy a new mic is cause my one's a 10 dollar junkie mic i stole from k-mart..so thats why i want a new mic and more than 50 bux i aint gonna spend..like you said its the mastering and mixing that does the job..so thanks again bro appreciate the breakdown :worship:
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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby mart85 » Feb 4th, '08, 23:19

nice track :y:

I liked the beat, it had a cool laid-back vibe... mixing was nice too... maybe more panning for the background instruments/sounds could have been cool, but overall nice job :y:

and I liked the chorus too, it was catchy :y: nice verses too

keep it up guys
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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby Xray » Feb 4th, '08, 23:25

mart85 wrote:nice track :y:

I liked the beat, it had a cool laid-back vibe... mixing was nice too... maybe more panning for the background instruments/sounds could have been cool, but overall nice job :y:

and I liked the chorus too, it was catchy :y: nice verses too

keep it up guys

thanks for the feed bro and glad you enjoyed it too :worship: :worship:
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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby B.A.D. » Feb 5th, '08, 00:50

beat is genious no doubt about that, lovin ur work tash

the lines are sick, pure great rhymes

the flow is very very diferent from what I expected but its very good, very nice touches to it

the quality is great, and hook is amazing too, you could turn the volume up a bit in the hook n thats all

can't wait for the tape, thats for sure
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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby Xray » Feb 5th, '08, 00:52

30-3 wrote:beat is genious no doubt about that, lovin ur work tash

the lines are sick, pure great rhymes

the flow is very very diferent from what I expected but its very good, very nice touches to it

the quality is great, and hook is amazing too, you could turn the volume up a bit in the hook n thats all

can't wait for the tape, thats for sure

thanks bro glad you liked the lyrics and song :worship:
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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 5th, '08, 01:23

okay as i told tash b4 but some1 wants me to post it again...
i love the hook...catchy as fuck :y: dont know about ur laid back flow...used to ur fire delievery
hmm mixing is fine...(did u change it tash? not so much reverb on the verses?)
hook outshines on this track....
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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby Xray » Feb 5th, '08, 01:25

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:okay as i told tash b4 but some1 wants me to post it again...
i love the hook...catchy as fuck :y: dont know about ur laid back flow...used to ur fire delievery
hmm mixing is fine...(did u change it tash? not so much reverb on the verses?)
hook outshines on this track....
:y:

thanks man..this song will be edited and remade for EP version :worship:
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Re: Automatic Murder (Prod. By X-Ray & Tash8 Productions)

Postby Tash8 » Feb 5th, '08, 02:58

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:okay as i told tash b4 but some1 wants me to post it again...
i love the hook...catchy as fuck :y: dont know about ur laid back flow...used to ur fire delievery
hmm mixing is fine...(did u change it tash? not so much reverb on the verses?)
hook outshines on this track....
:y:


sajjad wanted me to fix it, and he was right!

i thought the main problem with mixing for me was i put 2 much reverb, and i didn't master it too well, i didn't use compression cuz i forgot !!!

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