New Myspace & Verse To Launch It

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

This is preview of a track, that aint 100% finished yet, decided to release the first verse as a preview on the myspace to get it up and running sort of thing.

since i changed my style..as longer running members will notice, i aint putting my older tracks on this myspace, thats why the other track on it is a track with sajjad, its the only released verse with my new style/delivery ect.

as hard as it gets preview
http://www.myspace.com/barthewar

track is mixed by Tash (thanx again) it also aint the final mix but its good enough for a preview imo
Track is produced by RefugeeVibes (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... ndID=11290)

lay overs ect. will be added for final mix witch will be released soon

feed is apreaciated

Lyrics

put my knife in ya, ill kill ya like a g.o.a.t
slash n chop yer tight throat coz it joost spits shite notes
im a light bloke but dont try tempt me
ill make ya homeless so ya live rent free
in a sense i aint got any fucking innocent
a killed you yesterday n left you back in a tense
so just now everybodys finding out
when they go to grab the grater n your heads grinding out
i bring decapitation to this whole rapping nation
i get my inspiration from the inner spit your tasting
thats my acid that digest any mad shit you try press
your shits like sour powder compressed in a brest
stop tryna spit milk, n dont hurt what you aint killed
n still watch out ill come back with a demons wrath
n have you girl swimming in my seamon bath
so scared youll be running down the amen path (god)

[Rap Dogg]

aiyo,i like your stuff.nice beats,like the drums,tight flow,good lyrics.it's fuckin ''a''.lol
nice skills overall.respect

p.s. check out some of my stuff on http://www.audiojolt.com an type in rap dogg in the search box.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

aiyo,i like your stuff.nice beats,like the drums,tight flow,good lyrics.it's fuckin ''a''.lol
nice skills overall.respect

p.s. check out some of my stuff on http://www.audiojolt.com an type in rap dogg in the search box.

thanx man

and forgot to put but its not my beat lol, its produced by Refugeevibes, ill edit my 1st post with info on them lol

and ill check you stuff out once i edit the post lol

[IceAxe]

Good verse overall, flow fits nicely with the beat. The only thing I saw needed fixing was the intro is quieter than the verse part is, and the jump between the two is kind of sudden.

Should be pretty dope once the final mix is done

[B.A.D.]

uuuhh nice verse man, all nice

you accent is strange on this one, not like i've hurd before

and yeah, u did changed ur style 100%, the mastering could be a bit better tho' sound like ecoish and soft I dunno

I added u as a friend

[Xray]

damn thats some nice lyrics matches beat for some reason it sounds like some old school shit but alil more energy wouldnt hurt and the chorus is fucken crazy!, some catchy shit..overall dope..

ps: the second song is the shit

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

^thanx ya'll

and yeh the mastering will be tighter for the final version

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

nice verse....flow is strong but ur prouncation/accent is weird on this (as ax-d said)
lyrcis are fine no complains...
lookin forward to final version

[bg_pop]

add me man ?:)
SK soon ...WU UNDERSTAND Feat. me

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice verse....flow is strong but ur prouncation/accent is weird on this (as ax-d said)
lyrcis are fine no complains...
lookin forward to final version

thx and yeh my accent is strange but its coz im just doin it naturaly now and not switching my voice so suit the music lol

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

I loved it, just maybe put a little more emotion in it, other then that its great man

thanx man

and yeh i agree the emotion could be improved, hopefully the Layovers will fix that though

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

B-U-M-P

myspace needs more hit

[Vettori]

It's pretty sick :P....You should make it longer

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

It's pretty sick :P....You should make it longer

yeh the full version is 2 verses, plus a Ft. , just waiting on the ft.s verse and them the mixing to get tighter with the overlays ect. and itll be released i just put the preview on there so the myspace gets a boost lol and thanx man

[C-Game]

cool stuff man... kool chorus... reminds me of a jason movie...

use Deeser on certain parts wen u remaster...

kool flow and shit dude... KIU