NEW "Under My Skin" - Vettori

[Vettori]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/788720530c8421/

Beggining starts off a little bit to fast,
But after the first 4 lines it gets Better...Then the rest is ok.......

Btw the claritys off a little, cause i just came outta the cold, and recorded this right away, so i was still unthawing

[Tash8]

hahahhaa omg hahahahah omg

*I got nothing to say*

[mctworm]

i'll listen to it

[Vettori]

Would appreciate it

[B.A.D.]

the message is perfect... gotta respect you for that track

the quality and everything related to structuring is good
like I said, the main message is great

then hook is great.

I'm amazed of how white rappers are going so fucking good in hip hop, pure genious shit I always see here.

oh and btw: Verse 3 is pure death

[Vettori]

Thanks man Means alot

[<Stiiccy>]

overall i thought it was cool,,,umm i think like i would have gone a lil deeper in depth but thats justme....and of course the message is so true...if your white critics say you sound like eminem...i get that alot ,,but ehh what else can you do but make fun everyone and urself,,,lol well atleast thats what i do

[Vettori]

thx man, the way it was aimed at me was to a degree so i only mentioned my situation.. But i like this cause it will relate to alot of people..Thx for the feed

[Steve Spag]

I thought it was great dude. You started off a little choppy in my opinion but you really came in hard and you rocked a pretty amazing beat. Your rhyming scheme and flow and voice really matched well on this beat and made it really catchy. The hook was sick aswell. Props for bringing up a good topic, I respect that shit, I know what you're sayin'.

[Vettori]

Naw i didnt mean for it to sound like em, ugh haha anyways thanks for the feed its definatly all appreciated

Thx steve for ur view on it

[Tash8]

*if you dont feed this song, i'm cumming to ur house and coming on you, and no i wont mix up the words when i see you*

[Vettori]

Thanks maybe, ya songs are Amazing too :P..thing is u know it so i dun needa say it:P
haha respect man

[Vettori]

*if you dont feed this song, i'm cumming to ur house and coming on you, and no i wont mix up the words when i see you*

HAHAHAHA

[Vettori]

Thanks all feedback is appreciated

[Xray]

Beat choice: really nice and catchy feel to it

Verses: nice flow..before i thought this was aimed at me but after that pm i understand and for that reason i enjoyed the verses as i enjoyed ur usual tracks except this has a more catchy feel to it which i like

Chorus: i gotta admit the chorus sounds great but ur voice did sound like eminem alil and i think its because u recorded it wid a...whisper/energy feel to it imo

mixing: is very nice i actually admire your mixing..

good song man keep making what you do