Jay-19 - Daydreamer! New Shit!

[Jay-19]

This song was finished yesterday, and i'm pretty happy with it. It's just one verse and an outro though, but I'm happy with the result.

jay-19 - daydreamer.mp3 - 1.47MB

[Jay-19]

Come on guys, 25 views and 6 downloads? I'm not saying you HAVE to download, but it would be nice if those who did download it gave some feedback.

Please?

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

nice shit man...flow was kool...and ur lyrics kept it decent
quality could be improved lol...was worth listening
keep it up

[Speech]

some cool shit....i remember you..i got you on my old msn account...i liked this....quality lacked but hey the most of us have that problem so i'ma ignore that....lyrics were alright, nothing special but deff. worth the listen...cool shit i liked it..go a lil harder on emotions next time but bezize that, all cool

peace

[Jay-19]

Thanks guys! I very much appreciate the feedback!

[Xray]

that a decent track but if you master your acapellas better it would be nice i'd like to mix the song can I?

[Vettori]

SOunded pretty dope. Does need some work tho a little bit morewordplay would be nice
Mixing wasnt terrible but it was bareble:D I liked it, CHecked it twice Keep at it...U can definatly do better

[Jay-19]

@ Xray - Go ahead and mix it all you want! And thanks...

@ Vettori - Thanks man! I appreciate it!

[preest]

A fairly nice verse, I'd be happy with it too. I just think the beat neads maybe a bit more depth to match the flow, but lyrically it's tight and the concept is dope too (the whole daydreamer thing)!!

I think the delivery needs a little bit of work, but its only one verse at the moment so it aint a finished track, I think if you record two other verses and a hook it could be a really nice track given time and effort, other than little silly things I like it man!!!

[B.A.D.]

fuck!!! its amazing man

the beat excelent, the rhyme-scheme excelent
brapp excelent shit u got bumpin there

the verse is real good!!
the hook is ok, could've been better.... but the track itself is real good

the only thing u need is a better quality, I can help you out with that

other than that

[SajN]

Amazing man

Nice beat

Nice verse too, really cool
I don't know about the hook, it was ok for me, nothing much.

A great verse

[Jay-19]

Thanks for all the feedback guys! And I've decided that this isn't gonna be a whole track, just one verse. And the ex-chorus is going to be an outro of the song. This only verse gonna be on a mixtape.

Once again, thanks for all the feedback!

[Xray]

yo sorry bro for taking soo long on mixing this i forgot about it but ima get it done as soon as possible people be prepared for a newer version

[Jay-19]

yo sorry bro for taking soo long on mixing this i forgot about it but ima get it done as soon as possible people be prepared for a newer version

Actually, I forgot about it to! But this time I wont! This is gonna be interesting...