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***J-Blind - Blaow**** (New shit)

Postby Blind » Feb 25th, '08, 21:28

Check out my new club song and leave feed, of course. That time I worked on the mixing :y:
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Re: ***J-Blind - Blaow**** (New shit)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 25th, '08, 21:49

beat is terrible.

at the start you completely change the words to rhyme "cisual ?" lol

you flow over the beat i guess, but i mean the beat doesnt even have a flow lol

didnt enjoy the chorus. fast spitting sounded aritificaly done but if it wasnt then nice speed.


lyrically its bad but its a club track so i guess thats ok.

aint my type of track so cant say i enjoyed it
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Re: ***J-Blind - Blaow**** (New shit)

Postby M-Pyre » Feb 25th, '08, 22:23

the beat is good, I just didn't like that digitalized sound in the background!
overall very jumpy and fast.

ya lyrics were good for a club track, above average imo
ya flow was good to, I actually like it when you speed it up a notch, you got that shit down
btw are you American or British?

your voice is something you could listen to..for a minute or two, maby it's the track, but idk your voice..
sometimes I just couldn't understand you, you could work on that

and for the rest, just keep it up, cause this shit is (pretty) good quality.

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Re: ***J-Blind - Blaow**** (New shit)

Postby Blind » Feb 26th, '08, 07:47

Thanx for feeding
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:beat is terrible.at the start you completely change the words to rhyme "cisual ?" lolyou flow over the beat i guess, but i mean the beat doesnt even have a flow loldidnt enjoy the chorus. fast spitting sounded aritificaly done but if it wasnt then nice speed.lyrically its bad but its a club track so i guess thats ok.aint my type of track so cant say i enjoyed it

The reason you didn't like it it's just ain't you type of track. I guess you don't like crunk and everything done naturally...
M-Pyre wrote:the beat is good, I just didn't like that digitalized sound in the background!overall very jumpy and fast.ya lyrics were good for a club track, above average imoya flow was good to, I actually like it when you speed it up a notch, you got that shit downbtw are you American or British?your voice is something you could listen to..for a minute or two, maby it's the track, but idk your voice..sometimes I just couldn't understand you, you could work on thatand for the rest, just keep it up, cause this shit is (pretty) good quality.peace..........of cake

Thanx man, you pretty understandable :y: And Im russian, I spit quite cleary, maybe it's just because of my home studio, it ain't professional but I tried :unsure:
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Re: ***J-Blind - Blaow**** (New shit)

Postby Jay-19 » Feb 26th, '08, 12:04

Ain't really my type of track, but I can't say you're bad on it! You did really good imo! Keep it up man! :y:
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Re: ***J-Blind - Blaow**** (New shit)

Postby Blind » Feb 26th, '08, 13:14

KillahGoat wrote:Ain't really my type of track, but I can't say you're bad on it! You did really good imo! Keep it up man! :y:

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Re: ***J-Blind - Blaow**** (New shit)

Postby Speech » Feb 26th, '08, 20:19

this wasn all bad, i even enjoyed some parts of the track...quality isn too bad neither, could be better tho, but we all wish for that don't we? haha
lyrics were cool for a party track, flow alright, nothing off....beat wasn my type..i prefer chilled party beats, but this one worked for you, strong delivery and expression made this good
but if you wanna make more fans here, do some serious trax more often(i found out about that haha)
keep it up, potential is there, specially for a russian guy man :y: :y:
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Re: ***J-Blind - Blaow**** (New shit)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 26th, '08, 20:57

beat aint my time..but u did well on it :y:
liking ur quality (of course there's better) :p
hook was fuckin fast..and seems like ur stumbled over some words...keep workin on that
lol my leg shakes to the beat :unsure: lol?
lyrics work for party track (as spizzy said)
so yea keep it up...defo potential :y:
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Re: ***J-Blind - Blaow**** (New shit)

Postby B.A.D. » Feb 27th, '08, 00:46

beat 100% works for me

the whole club conept is nice on this one, quality is nice... but lyrics, sometimes their bit too good for a club track

fits my style everypoint...

great work on this one :worship:
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Re: ***J-Blind - Blaow**** (New shit)

Postby Blind » Feb 27th, '08, 11:46

Thanx to everybody for feeding, I'll give it back to those who post their songs here :b: :b:
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