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Postby <Stiiccy> » Feb 27th, '08, 02:18

http://www.zshare.net/audio/8146661c4f69c8/

Its just the 1st and 3rd verse....
my homie j-fear is gonna be on the 2nd verse
but hes not finished
so tell me what yall think
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Re: NEW SONg DESPORADOES

Postby <Stiiccy> » Feb 27th, '08, 02:21

uhh i spelled song wrong my bad
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Re: NEW SOND DESPORADOES

Postby mctworm » Feb 27th, '08, 03:49

that was hardcore, fo shizzle. A little horrocore acid techno mixed wit rap, totally pimped out! =P~
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Re: NEW SOND DESPORADOES

Postby <Stiiccy> » Feb 27th, '08, 04:01

mctworm wrote:that was hardcore, fo shizzle. A little horrocore acid techno mixed wit rap, totally pimped out! =P~

damn techno??
never looked at it that way but ok thanks for the good feedback :y: :y: :y:
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Re: NEW SOND DESPORADOES

Postby Xray » Feb 27th, '08, 04:44

beat is very nice, but again your not flowing proper on the beat and you need to mix your songs better other than that cool shit keep at it :b:
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Postby <Stiiccy> » Feb 27th, '08, 05:49

Xray wrote:beat is very nice, but again your not flowing proper on the beat and you need to mix your songs better other than that cool shit keep at it :b:

ahh really Im really tryin to get that right...ive gotton better tho
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Re: NEW SOND DESPORADOES

Postby DelinQuent » Feb 27th, '08, 06:35

this is WAY fucking better than what you posted before, but yes work on your flow and try to stay on beat better.

this is no lie 100% better than the stuff you posted first.

chorus is weak, but not terrible

1st verse the voice you used kinda threw me off but i got used to it.

2nd verse, rhymes are weak here, idk, you fell off in this verse

keep working and gimme some feed in my song i just posted, thanks
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Re: NEW SOND DESPORADOES

Postby <Stiiccy> » Feb 27th, '08, 06:43

lol i thought the 2nd verse was the shit lol
i mean cmon "you couldnt rap hotter than me if you had a portable oven"
idk thanks for the feed tho :y: :y:
i gave you some feed on ur song as well
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Re: NEW SOND DESPORADOES

Postby Tash8 » Feb 27th, '08, 06:57

sticcy z wrote:lol i thought the 2nd verse was the shit lol
i mean cmon "you couldnt rap hotter than me if you had a portable oven"
idk thanks for the feed tho :y: :y:
i gave you some feed on ur song as well


not that great of a line to be honest

ur second verse u ignored everything i told you

u went completely off beat opposed to the first verse where u were someone on beat.
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Re: NEW SOND DESPORADOES

Postby <Stiiccy> » Feb 27th, '08, 07:09

Tash8 wrote:
sticcy z wrote:lol i thought the 2nd verse was the shit lol
i mean cmon "you couldnt rap hotter than me if you had a portable oven"
idk thanks for the feed tho :y: :y:
i gave you some feed on ur song as well


not that great of a line to be honest

ur second verse u ignored everything i told you

u went completely off beat opposed to the first verse where u were someone on beat.


ahhh
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