I decided to remake it, because i think the lyrics are good, but i was terrible back then.
Here's the track:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/8227098cd8d2fe/
http://www.zshare.net/audio/82271733a2fb1b/
Kez wrote:I put so much pressure on opponents that i cause earthquakes
People get jealous and deliver worse hate
I don't care about my age, his age or her age
I'd get more meat than i got from this battle from a burnt steak!
So think what you want, why should my age matter?
I should start as soon as i can, it helps create manners
That i'll use in later life, listen, my mates had a
Right laugh when they heard my recording, i won't stop this is fate, and the
People who criticize need to stop being critics
Cause when they leave, i want them to leave with it
Replaying in their mind cause the lyrics are worth it
I reveal feeling, like you pay attention to what you see, hear what you hear, which is
My special section i excel in
I think i do, from my reception feels like i repel it
But i'm still hellbent to succeed in this so you can pellet
My rap songs with insults but i'll forever try to sell it!
[Chorus]
I'm the true lyricist, who makes you wish you weren't as shit
As you really are, cause i outrap you too when i really spit
Battling me, is your newest fear, it is
You can try to deny it, but i know you just really wish
That when i battle you, you could die from bloodloss as blue as the bluest river is
I piss people off with the truths that i yearly dish
Cause they think i'm just a useless queer and bitch
So get your teeth chewing in it, cause i'm the true lyricist!
I'm the master of MCs, in a Punto shattering Bentleys
Standing on top of the podium with bent knees
I'm so high up, i crouch to see second and third
Listen to the records and words, i'm an exception of heard
Emcees who not even 18 yet, i hate it being said
That i shouldn't rap due to my age, i make obscene better
Than it already is, cause this shit is all me
But nobody, yeah i said nobody, will control me!
I rap for life, i can trap your fright
In a single rhyme, my imagination can fuckin attack your mind
It's an assault on the senses, you've not felt it before
It can destroy any metal, can start melting it raw
Sitting reading this your brain is going way too fast
You can't comprehend it, recording this would make you gasp
It never takes me long, to pick out which words rhyme
Hearing these lyrics must hurt your mind, shit, it hurts mine!
[Chorus]
I'm the true lyricist, who makes you wish you weren't as shit
As you really are, cause i outrap you too when i really spit
Battling me, is your newest fear, it is
You can try to deny it, but i know you just really wish
That when i battle you, you could die from bloodloss as blue as the bluest river is
I piss people off with the truths that i yearly dish
Cause they think i'm just a useless queer and bitch
So get your teeth chewing in it, cause i'm the true lyricist!
I'm the true lyricist, who makes you wish you weren't as shit
As you really are, cause i outrap you too when i really spit
Battling me, is your newest fear, it is
You can try to deny it, but i know you just really wish
That when i battle you, you could die from bloodloss as blue as the bluest river is
I piss people off with the truths that i yearly dish
Cause they think i'm just a useless queer and bitch
So get your teeth chewing in it, cause i'm the true lyricist..
You may have noticed there are two versions. Well that's where i need your help.
I have a real quality problem, as has been noted, so i'm requiring help from people to make it better.
I have 2 different mixin techniques (one taught from Sajjad, the other my own)
I need you to listen and decide which sounds better, and which i should use for my other tracks
Below are the Acapellas for both, and you should judge from that (more accurate), the above tracks is just a lil track for listenin.
Acapella first method, taught by Ax: http://www.zshare.net/audio/8227294563b9ba/
Second acapella method, taught by SaJJad: http://www.zshare.net/audio/82274178c3b7cf/
Give me an answer! Cause if you wanna end my crappy quality, you need to help with this.
Also, feed on the track appreciated
