Bar - I Dont Wanne (Preview)

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Another preview of another up and coming track, im working on a small tape so i aint releasing a single for it rather just some previews of the material on it.

This track is not mastered, so any feedback on the mixing side is also apreaciated.

http://www.myspace.com/barthewar

microphone-itis dont bite im known to write this
with the like-ness of the loch-ness a monstorous artist
but never seen but in the shadows i spark this
got legendary status before the proof that i exist
so in the mist the misterious mc they cant see
but be hearing this a stay transparrent though my rhymes
then be a parent to your lines like a gave a birth to them
but be protective, so if no flow give a low blow
even if it is my son ya know
im metiphoricly hidden like a hidden metophor
i bet on more people to stop undertsanding
as im standing under or well just under standing
so let me clear this hyped metiphircal sound
im simple talking about how im underground
people asking why i changed what i do
coz i decided i dont even wanne break though

i dont wanne sell a million records
im sticking to chess so ya'll can play with checkers
i dont even want a deal
ill still eat signed artist by the 3 course meal
im real

the delivery on this is less energetic than it could be, i feel as if the way i did it suited the beat but depending on opinions i may try record it again with a different take.

feed is apreciated

[Xray]

that beat WHERE THE FUCK DID YOU GET IT FROM love the flow and the chorus is awesome and the lyrics were dope on the verse but i wanna hear the mixed version NOW!!!!

[nagapcire]

Can't really understand you that well. Are you rapping in english?

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Can't really understand you that well. Are you rapping in english?

ha. ha. ha. no its japanese


@sajjad, thanx man, and its a adminio beats or something Ax-D knows the soundclick page coz he was talking about the producers yesterday lol

[nagapcire]

Oh ok sorry I don't understand Japanese.

[Kez]

Love the beat
The lyrics are great
Your delivery is great on this beat, real sinister
Flow is brilliant
Hook is great
Concept and message are nice
I hear a few pops quality wise at times but it don't matter

For a preview this is great, your tape is gonna be great

EDIT: Oh and Bar, you mean Anno Domini?

DOUBLE EDIT: Lmao at this guy above

TRIPLE EDIT: Lmao at this same guy below

[mctworm]

cool lyrics... nice beat, but japanese?

[DelinQuent]

i actually don't like the beat.

but yes your delivery suits the beat well. your lyrics are good, but something seems off, maybe the flow. i like the chorus tho. good job 8/10

[lil_bayly]

hmmm ok dude i know ur well known on here and shit and i think people are afraid to tell u the truth, but i am not so here it is:


Ur accent makes it hella hard to understand ur words bro
It sounds like Scrooge McDuck trying to rap, no hate for real
The beats are sick, im feeling them for sure
But i dont think u have the "voice" to be recording raps man
And the lyrical stuff aint all that good, its like u just used whatever word to fit that rhymed??
Anyways like i said the beats are sick, but thats really all i enjoyed.

[B.A.D.]

FUUUUUUUUUCK I wrote a whole big feed, but fuckin internet went "page not found" damn

I'll write it again resumed lol

the beat is great, but no the best from anno domini, altho fits the track hmm

nice lyrics, I quoted some on the previous feed, but fuckin net lol... sick lyrics

also, mixing, could be better, like pellas up n stuff

damn, It really got me so mad hahaha with my net, I'll edit the post again with the right feed

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Ur accent makes it hella hard to understand ur words bro

every accent prounounces words different making it a point against anyone is stupid, if you cant understand maybe your just stupid...yes ?

It sounds like Scrooge McDuck trying to rap, no hate for real

real mature

But i dont think u have the "voice" to be recording raps man

and what is the recording raps voice ? everyone sounds different so im guessing everyones voice isnt the recording raps voice.

And the lyrical stuff aint all that good, its like u just used whatever word to fit that rhymed??

your obviously dumb if you cant grasp my multi's, metaphors, word play in that verse coz im telling you there's plenty. and its not as if lyrical skill can be debated coz its either there or it isnt, and in this verse its there. everything also makes perfect sense in a metiphorical sense, and even at that most of it is just lines there is no way for it not to make sense coz im just rapping with a thin concept at some parts...so uh yeh...maybe if this came form a guy who hasnt had somehting against me since i battled them like 2 years ago and lost id take it seriously. but since your generally an arsehole say what you want coz i dont see you having the balls to post a rap of any standard anywere


@DQ, thx for checking and feeding man and i get what you mean, you can ask ax-d and kez, i gave them this before uploading coz i felt there was something not right and i didnt know if it was mixing or delivery or what, i couldnt grasp what was wrong, both of them sayed it sounded kool for a preview though so i decided to get a widier view and then find out what it is and try re-do it to fix it lol


@kez, thanx man, apreaciate the feed and support and yeh thats the name of the producer lol

@ax-d thanx man, apreaciate the feed

[mart85]

nice preview... the delivery was good for that beat like you said, and that style fits you well IMO... I thought some layovers could have been tighter, or better aligned maybe, but other than that it was sick great job

and yeah, keep it up, your one of the best japanese rappers I heard

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice preview... the delivery was good for that beat like you said, and that style fits you well IMO... I thought some layovers could have been tighter, or better aligned maybe, but other than that it was sick great job

and yeah, keep it up, your one of the best japanese rappers I heard

thanx man, and yeh the layovers were annoying me so imma defiantly do them again, especially the "rhyme" "line" ones, they are bad lmao and yeh, me and Jin are gonni hook up first ever chinese and japanese artists to do a track together lol


oh yeh, these tracks/verses i been releasing is coz im tryna work on my flow and delivery and if feel its got alot better so thats why the mixing side of things have been rushed and/or put to the side bit, maybe i could be lazy but mixing and mastering a full track then getting told "the flow was off a little delivery could be better" was the reason im doing previews then fixing them getting them mixed properly and puting them on the tape lol

thanx to everyone for checking

[Tash8]

pretty damn good man, one if ur berst recently

ur pella needs to be louder..

and your pronounciation isn't too good in this one!!! i think it's cuase your accent is kinda making u slur words...

keep it up!

[nagapcire]

hmmm ok dude i know ur well known on here and shit and i think people are afraid to tell u the truth, but i am not so here it is:


Ur accent makes it hella hard to understand ur words bro
It sounds like Scrooge McDuck trying to rap, no hate for real
The beats are sick, im feeling them for sure
But i dont think u have the "voice" to be recording raps man
And the lyrical stuff aint all that good, its like u just used whatever word to fit that rhymed??
Anyways like i said the beats are sick, but thats really all i enjoyed.

Thats what I'm saying, you can't really understand this dude, he definitely shouldn't be rapping. LMAO at the scrooge mcduck shit that was funny.