**THE LEGEND**

[Rap Dogg]

What up people? I made a little song dedicated to fallen rappers(legends).I'm talkin bout them,but also bout a life of rappers in general.So listen to it an I'd appreciate if you'd tell me what you think about it,and what's your opinion on that issue.Thank you.

Here's the link to it: http://www.zshare.net/audio/8527285cac0a08/

[mctworm]

thats a cool topic to rap about. Love the beat. I give it an 9/10!

[$0 R3@L]

-accent is wacky

-beat is ok

-gun shots over used

-what the hells it all about?

-biggie,pac etc shoutouts are overdone and got un-original bout the fifth time sum aftermath artist used it

-keep working on concepts and delievery

4\10

[kaine_85]

i like your sound man

[DelinQuent]

i'm not feelin this. the flow seems off. idk, your delivery also left me wanting more. quality needs to be better aswell. keep workin

[Speech]

didn feel that too much sorry bro....uhm..potential is there, no doubt.just work on your pronounciation...sounded like you had sth. in your mouth * no homo*

oh well not a 0 / 10....but not a 10 / 10 neither....kep it up

[Rap Dogg]

thanks to all od you.i'll try to improove my raps.thank you

[Tash8]

the idiot who gave you 9/10

ignore him....


u need to work on flow, lyrics, and delievery and you should learn how to mix ur stuff better... otherwise it will sound bad

keep at it.

freestyles to help your flow
lyrics, just keep practicing
delievery, rap like you mean it

[Rap Dogg]

look,i don't wanna sound ignorant,but the easiest thing is to criticize.I mean,tash8,you ever made a rap song?except the beats? Gettin ma point? An I don't care how critics may be bad,I used to it,cuz no matter how good you are,people will never be satisfied.

[Tash8]

look,i don't wanna sound ignorant,but the easiest thing is to criticize.I mean,tash8,you ever made a rap song?except the beats? Gettin ma point? An I don't care how critics may be bad,I used to it,cuz no matter how good you are,people will never be satisfied.

I have made a song before... so there your point is suddenly invalid.