At Their Mercy

[Rain Matrix]

at their mercy.mp3 - 2.82MB

any better for ya?

[DelinQuent]

there's a lot of good rhyming, but there's no flow or delivery. keep working.

[Rain Matrix]

I'll take a lot of good rhyming and a flow in progress

over a lot of bad rhymes and a decent flow

I think this is considerable progress from my last audio

[Tash8]

improvement but u still dont' got much of a flow.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

ill say it once again

rhyme simple to learn a decent flow, then work on complexity