*New* King Jafee - My Veins - WHO WON TEST ME!!

[King Jafee]

Well to satisfy the urges....

Lets keep it real to educate the mind.

King Jafee - My Veins
http://www.zshare.net/audio/718737035bed9c/

Off the album Save the Children

FEEDBACK?

HATE?

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[King Jafee]

Yeah well I need to rerecord this cuz ur hearing the rough draft....

vocals are wild....

good look on the feedback though...

[<Stiiccy>]

i loved the beat ,,,
the lyrics were there
and flow was preety good
and you kept it real and thats always a plus
if you fix the vocals and dub em and shit
its a 8/10

[King Jafee]

will do
redo vocals

[B.A.D.]

my nikka, this some tight ish ya hear me

hot thang u got there bro, the ol' skul feelin is aiiite, lovin it

the blank parts, when u don't rap on some parts kinda weak, didn't liked that

but overall nice track son, goin to my mp3... the quality perfect, flow at its best..

yo son, u gota halla at ya boi for a collab..

peace

[Jay-19]

This track is on fire man! And if you use some voice samples in the stops between the lyrics, I think it will turn out really really good. You should try that.

Other than that, it's all good. I love the delivery and the flow, that old school-feeling sounds really good coming from you. And the beat is awesome.

Deffy a 9/10!

[Xray]

smh at the posts above fully loving this played out style

first of all the date is 09/03/2008 and your style is kinda 90's style so that ain't good.
you need to keep up to date on music, its not the old school days no more.
your flow is completely played out, the beat is even more played out.
the lyrics are even old school..you really need to change the date on your comp if its not 2008

[Kez]

smh at the posts above fully loving this played out style

first of all the date is 09/03/2008 and your style is kinda 90's style so that ain't good.
you need to keep up to date on music, its not the old school days no more.
your flow is completely played out, the beat is even more played out.
the lyrics are even old school..you really need to change the date on your comp if its not 2008

Don't say that SaJJad, he and that Makaveli525 guy might "diss" us back

Your rhymes are pretty good. Beat is decent though i agree with SaJJad. Your flow is nice too.
But in terms of delivery, vocal volume and (possibly) quality, you remind me of Rain Matrix. It sounds too quiet.
Hook is decent.

[King Jafee]

yeah the vocals are low as shit i already know i gotta redo em i just wanted overall feedback...

BUT NEVER IN UR LIFE COMPARE ME TO RAIN MATRIX NO OFFENSE HOMIE BUT STICK TO WRITING RAIN CUZ UR SPIT GAME IS SUBPAR....

sorry for yellin...

and LMAO@ e-beef....

my old school flow?

lmao

ummm well im hip hop homie

i do music

i dont do "styles"

thats the problem with the whole culture today...

too many "styles"..

wtf is an old school style?

that is a major label term homie

i dont do labels...

i do music...

step ur hate game up

ZAMUNDA1!!!!!

[Cwayon_Murder]

Jafee you're officially a dick. Congrats

P.S. - Why is it when someone says "no offense", the thing that they say before/after is always really offensive? As if saying that makes it any better...

[B.A.D.]

yo jafee, fuck em

youre ol skul flow is killa mate, yo nikka.. holla

keep doin that thang, its hottttt!!!!!!!!!

[Cwayon_Murder]

I never said anything about how good he was at rapping.
His songs are very good. I love the flow and lyrics. But what he said is just fucking rude.
"BUT NEVER IN UR LIFE COMPARE ME TO RAIN MATRIX NO OFFENSE HOMIE BUT STICK TO WRITING RAIN CUZ UR SPIT GAME IS SUBPAR...."
That's just fuckin mean...

But whatever...I understand this isn't a place to be nice to everyone. Just pointing it out...

[Xray]

yeah the vocals are low as shit i already know i gotta redo em i just wanted overall feedback...

BUT NEVER IN UR LIFE COMPARE ME TO RAIN MATRIX NO OFFENSE HOMIE BUT STICK TO WRITING RAIN CUZ UR SPIT GAME IS SUBPAR....

sorry for yellin...

and LMAO@ e-beef....

my old school flow?

lmao

ummm well im hip hop homie

i do music

i dont do "styles"

thats the problem with the whole culture today...

too many "styles"..

wtf is an old school style?

that is a major label term homie

i dont do labels...

i do music...

step ur hate game up

ZAMUNDA1!!!!!

your really stupid if you think me criticizing your played out shit is e-beef.
and i don't care what you think you wanted feed so i did.
last time i feed on these stupid ass new fuckers.
you leave them real feed. and all the sudden they wanna bite you

[Kez]

^ Hey, if you don't want opinions, don't post it.

Or you could request that only people who like it post feedback.

[Makaveli525]

shit... what he's saying is true
1) he is the furthest possible thing from rain matrix
2) his "played out flow" is an example of an MC knowing how to be versatile... he has plenty of other styles if you listen to any of the other tracks (club shit, gun tracks, etc)

dont hate just cuz he disagrees with you...