BLAME ME-NICE TRACK(snippet) FEED

[Rap Dogg]

What up?I made a snippet of ma new song I'm recordin.Tell me what ya think.It's bout blamin me always for somethin wrong.Pretty hot rock beat.Please feed.thanks

blame me snippet.mp3 - 1.94MB

[DelinQuent]

ive heard this beat somewhere.

you have a weird pronunciation. you sound american but then you use an odd voice and it sounds like youre trying to force your delivery. the chorus starts strong but then it turns bad, mixing needs to be done better, it sounded mashed up. i can't understand what youre saying so i can't comment the lyrics, but the rhymes didn't sound too good. flow was also odd but i think that was due to your delivery. keep workin

[Rap Dogg]

aight,thanks
respect

[Speech]

hmm wasn aaaall bad...flow at the beginning was decent..turned wack as it came near the chorus..the chorus, thatz what i didn like delivery wise....and yeah dq right, you pronounciation is a lil odd, but i did get most of the words so it's aaite...sounds like you caught a cold man haha...no frontin lol...concept was cool..i like shit like that..shows emotion (if it's done right ) lol..so work on ya energy and try not to get ya voice so high pitched at parts sounded funny to me..but cool shit, nice try

step it up

[Jay-19]

I see how you tried to flow on the beat, and it works at some parts of the song, but it isn't that good. It's probably because of what the others above me said, because of the way you change your voice and the way you pronounce alot of the words, if you just start off with your regular voice you have all the time, and rap with that, i think it'll sound alot better. Then you can play with it and find your right state of voice to rap with. The beat in this song is good, I like it. And the chorus ain't all that bad, i liked the beginning, but then it went a little downhill. but yeah, keep on working man! i really see the potential.

[Rap Dogg]

....and yeah dq right, you pronounciation is a lil odd, but i did get most of the words so it's aaite...sounds like you caught a cold man haha...no frontin lol...concept was cool..i like shit like that..shows emotion (if it's done right ) lol..so work on ya energy and try not to get ya voice so high pitched at parts sounded funny to me..but cool shit, nice try

step it up

My pronounciation is a lil odd cuz I'm from Croatia(Europe).An bout the voice,the thing is that I actually had a little cold. Thanks to all of you.I'll try to record it again,besides that,it's just the snippet.To see what do people think.Thanks to KillahGoat for advice bout the voice.I'll take ma time out an try it.An I don't like the ending of the chorus either.I'll rewrite it.Respect

[B.A.D.]

beat is tight, nice choice

quality is great, but can be better..

the emiotion is tight, won't complain about pronunciation, I have the same problem lol

lyrics and concept is tight, the hook is catchy n good, but kinda looses the flow a bit
interesting style.. I liked that

all u need to work on is audio quality, that can be fixed easy

nice track bro

[Speech]

....and yeah dq right, you pronounciation is a lil odd, but i did get most of the words so it's aaite...sounds like you caught a cold man haha...no frontin lol...concept was cool..i like shit like that..shows emotion (if it's done right ) lol..so work on ya energy and try not to get ya voice so high pitched at parts sounded funny to me..but cool shit, nice try

step it up

My pronounciation is a lil odd cuz I'm from Croatia(Europe).An bout the voice,the thing is that I actually had a little cold. Thanks to all of you.I'll try to record it again,besides that,it's just the snippet.To see what do people think.Thanks to KillahGoat for advice bout the voice.I'll take ma time out an try it.An I don't like the ending of the chorus either.I'll rewrite it.Respect

you from europe too? wazzup ma european brotttthhaaaa haha...many of my friends are from Croatia, shwoing luv haha
and lol @ you really having a cold
aaite re-record, add some more verses (i think 200 verses should be enough lmao)...and this shit koo....looking out for ya final version buddy

[Rap Dogg]

I'll holla when I re-record it.thank ya'll for the support.