Fraudulent

[Block]

I'mma get some hate, but it's all good... Tash on the mixing, great job... Shout outs to him

http://www.soundclick.com/siinide



verse 1:
so you think its funny im not doing this for money
i dont wanna be a slave that the governments running
walk into my house and the wife n kids are bloody
cos i didnt call the motherfucking president buddy
you think i dont know about the tuskegee studies
in 1932 when they were left to fucking die
government guinea pigs their treatment was denied
Atomic bombs, project F & flouride
project paperclip is where nazi's reside
face it motherfuckers we all know that you lied
take it in stride cos we going world wide
like the green house effect, if you know what i mean
they'd ship me off to war at the age of eight teen
yet i cant seat a bar or a sip of jim beam
changes in the doctrines are yet to be seen
England had it right man, GOD SAVE THE QUEEN

hook: x2
what happened to America and freedom of speech
and yo, what happened to the people's.. right to impeach
and yo, what happened to the poor folk dead in the streets
the millions lives lost when the levis were breached

Verse 2:
we were founded on outcast revolutionaries
then became what we fought against, now thats scary
how the fuck we go, from tippin tea on a fairy
to banning our schools from receiting hail maries
then we wonder why all these guns are getting carried
i still dont understand what the war is against
vietnam police action sure its defense
the citizens are past-tense like the word WAS
Take the blue pill but dont explain what it does
they're Gaining ya trust while yer fading to dust
government conspiracies waiting to bust
your pain they discuss while they foil yer health
We fight a war on terror or for oil & wealth
dont you fuckers know there's no oil in hell
its not a war on terror its for oil & wealth
i told you mother fuckers theres no oil in hell

hook: x2
what happened to America and freedom of speech
and yo, what happened to the people's.. right to impeach
and yo, what happened to the poor folk dead in the streets
the millions lives lost when the levis were breached

verse 3:
if our fathers would've known this kind of deprivation
i wonder if they even woulda signed the decleration
i wonder if they knew the hard times they'd be facing
like ignorant criminals in line to be placed in
solitairy cells for their minds to erase in
all these empty thoughts got my mind really racing
This the world we live in I try to embrace it
it leaves me feeling dead cold defiled & naked
empty like a jar when all it's contents been taken
Now i understand why God felt forsaken
man killing man duke we need to be awakened

[<Stiiccy>]

wow i really loved this track bro...
im not a fan of political type tracks but this one really was truthful and was real...
your flow was great through out the song
the beat was awsome...
the hook was catchy but not cheesy...
your raps were fuckin DOPE...those multis were the shit...
man this a 10/10....i wanta here more from you homie,, keep it up

[Block]

wow i really loved this track bro...
im not a fan of political type tracks but this one really was truthful and was real...
your flow was great through out the song
the beat was awsome...
the hook was catchy but not cheesy...
your raps were fuckin DOPE...those multis were the shit...
man this a 10/10....i wanta here more from you homie,, keep it up

thanks for the feed man, ill be sure to return it when i wake up in the morning

[DelinQuent]

damnnnn, i'm feelin this track. flow... hot. lyrics... hot. concept, not my thing but you made me like it. the ONLY negative thing i could see was what seemed to be a pronunciation problem, like when you said "feeling" you pronounced it "feewing". but overall a god damn good song. i'm giving this a SOLID 8.5/10. def gonna listen a few more times. keep up the good work, and try to get better quality.

[<VerbalTouch>]

Dope as fuck deep as fuck damn my man you got some truth in there

Think ya can send me that instrumental?

[Nu Syd]

lyrics on point,i agree with most of it,but,i couldent hear you, weak vocal pressence, hard to make out what you were saying so i was reading while listening, beat is nice. Decent track.

[Block]

Thanks for the feed everyone, appreciate it.. ill hit all yall up that feeded & feed your tracks.

Delinquent - Editing what i said first... i see what you mean.. "feeling dead cold defiled and naked" yeah, guess i slurred that a bit. thanks for pointing that out, man. ill work on it next time.

Dj i'll upload the beat tomorrow and get it to you.


goodlooks yall.

[Xray]

so you've been so up yourself and this is all you got?

fuck, you've got the biggest ego for a shit cunt.

you have 10% energy, and yet your talking politics, let me tell you this buddy. if you were telling a speech in front of a nation, would you speak that soft?..how can you express your lyrics and what you feel with energy that sounds like you don't give a fuck, and lyrics that say you do give a fuck? im confused here. Are you trying to tell us a message about the world or are you trying to act like you give a fuck, but you dont? i don't know about everybody but i see acting in this song

and as for the mixing, tash you always talk about, you shouldn't be able to hear the reverb in a rap song, but here this song has reverb touching the ceiling? and we need to talk about you mixing for a faget, who dissed me, big ax-d & kez. so what the fuck is going on?

[Block]

so you've been so up yourself and this is all you got?

fuck, you've got the biggest ego for a shit cunt.

you have 10% energy, and yet your talking politics, let me tell you this buddy. if you were telling a speech in front of a nation, would you speak that soft?..how can you express your lyrics and what you feel with energy that sounds like you don't give a fuck, and lyrics that say you do give a fuck? im confused here. Are you trying to tell us a message about the world or are you trying to act like you give a fuck, but you dont? i don't know about everybody but i see acting in this song

and as for the mixing, tash you always talk about, you shouldn't be able to hear the reverb in a rap song, but here this song has reverb touching the ceiling? and we need to talk about you mixing for a faget, who dissed me, big ax-d & kez. so what the fuck is going on?

Everyone welcome in my number one cockrider. hes keeps my dick warm when axe d isnt on it.

LMAO funny youre the only guys hating, sweetheart.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

delivery needs work, and your voice needs to be projected more, hook is horrible, lyrics are good and flow is good, beat is really nice, mixing isnt to good, too much reverb on it tash and the hissing is annoying. concept is nice but i think you chose the wrong type of beat and style to do this concept on.

[<VerbalTouch>]

Please lets stop the fighting

Its fun to fight when you got some in you

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

flow is pretty kool...somtimes a bit !!choppy!! ( )....lyrics are good man...
delievery is fine to but mixing fucks it up
keep it up
advice: better mixing

[Tash8]

holy fucking shit, everyone that complains about reverb can suck my dick cuz i didn't put reverb at all.

here's how i got it
http://www.zshare.net/audio/101768338010f8e3/

first of all, ask kblock how many times i told him that his room has got too much verb... you assholes complain too much...

and sajjad don't tell me how i cna collab with or not, i couldn't careless if he was dissing you... that's ur problem and it's a stupid one.

[Block]

delivery needs work, and your voice needs to be projected more, hook is horrible, lyrics are good and flow is good, beat is really nice, mixing isnt to good, too much reverb on it tash and the hissing is annoying. concept is nice but i think you chose the wrong type of beat and style to do this concept on.

I guess it could be projected more, but i dont agree with the hook part... you're the first and only person to not like it. The reverb is caused by my room because it echoes. i havent set things up yet.
and truthfully, this beat was made for these type of songs... its a jedi minds beat, and this the typa song that's on it originally.

first of all, ask kblock how many times i told him that his room has got too much verb... you assholes complain too much...

and sajjad don't tell me how i cna collab with or not, i couldn't careless if he was dissing you... that's ur problem and it's a stupid one.

Tash did what he could... My room echoes horribly, lol.

but on the real...... Sajjad you're being mad immature homie, lol. I don't come into your threads & shit.. hell, i could careless about you if you wouldnt tell some one to stop rapping.

[IceAxe]

Really the only advice I have is to project your voice more, and I almost couldn't tell where the hook was. Other than that try to cut down on the echo some how, or record in another room entirely maybe.

9/10