MesAyah - Obstacles

[MesAyah]

Puttin out my newest track so peeps can listen, feedback is much appreciated

its called obstacles, and its all about the obstacles you have to cross both inner and outter in ya life.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=6161619

Norwegian Greetings
MesAyah

[MesAyah]

for fans of: Aesop Rock, Atmosphere, Genesis, Pink Floyd, Metallica, Bach, Mozart

Since your a new person I go ahead and listen, but try to give others feed if you want it

and to post it up on zshare

great track man, really nice flow and everything, I loved that beat

hehe what can i say man, i got diversity in my musical listenings, its more like a statement of as long as i feel something every genre can appeal to me. but yeah i am a real huge early Genesis Fan

I will feedback later when i have audiopossibilities, i'm at work now. then i will feed my heart out:)

and thanxs bro, appreciated that you liked it

Peace

[Kez]

Nice beat
Lyrics pretty good, some good lines
Your flow and delivery is pretty good, i like the light calmness there is, flow aint perfect but it's decent
Your pella sounds a little bit far away/quiet.
Quality sounds fine
Hook could do with a bit of boosting on the vocals

Good track though

[MesAyah]

I will feedback later when i have audiopossibilities, i'm at work now. then i will feed my heart out:)

kool man, nice to have another rapper on the forum

and I'm more of a megadeth fan myself

hehe yeah, i have never really been checking out megadeath, do you have any songs that needs to bee checked out?

[MesAyah]

Nice beat
Lyrics pretty good, some good lines
Your flow and delivery is pretty good, i like the light calmness there is, flow aint perfect but it's decent
Your pella sounds a little bit far away/quiet.
Quality sounds fine
Hook could do with a bit of boosting on the vocals

Good track though

thnxs for the listen bro, and i will do something about the hook before i release it out there. its just small small adjustments, but yeah it will be a little boost and a little tonedifference in the back. then it will be more lively, i just needed some feeds in the process, so its funny you mentioned it:)

Peace

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

the beat is fucking awesome, im actually in love with it lol, dope beat


i like your roughness on the delivery catches my attention when listening, lyrics are really good, maybe a little more projection in your voice some stuff sounds a little muddled but nothing that hurts the track, your flow is really good, hook is good i like it.

overally a really good track man, you got a diverse sort of sounding style and its really good, keep it up man

[SajN]

Good to see you here man (I know this guy people )

As I've already said; I like ur tracks, so just keep it up.

This guy needs to be checked out

[Big Proof 4ever]

cud u up it on zshare?

[MesAyah]

cud u up it on zshare?

http://www.zshare.net/audio/10334047f9205344/


there you go, and thanxs for all kind words and warm welcome to the forum

[Big Proof 4ever]

amazing havent used this word yet it sounds perfect for me

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

u flow perfect to this beat ...
its pretty could....could get somewhere
keep at it fo sho....nice track

[Emadyville]

Great track, loved the line "I've conquered minds but I'm trying to conquer mine". Great flow, sick beat, only thing coulda been better was the chorus, but it was still dope. Great job!

[B.A.D.]

oh word, we got another good rapper here... good lookin

the beat is amazing, I could defo work good on that one

hook is aiiite.. not the best but its good, u had an amazing rhyme-scheme there and lyrics were top

verses sound ill, the concept it a bit too overrated but that's just my opinion, can't deny its well played tho'.. the lyrics, flow and rhymes are great, so nice job on that

the delivery is perfect, the emotion can be felt, that's good....

quality is ok, but the effects proces isn't done quite excelent... and volume of the pella is too high, but very very decent anyways...

seem's like you've been practicing for a lot now... u got what it needs... just keep makin music

& welcome to the forum lol

[Jay-19]

I pretty much love this track!

I think the lyrics are great, so is the delivery. The flow is also really really good. And like Bar said, I'm in love with the beat. I'm actually thinking about asking it out to a date.

This track rocks. Pure fire man! Keep it up!

[MesAyah]

oh word, we got another good rapper here... good lookin

the beat is amazing, I could defo work good on that one

hook is aiiite.. not the best but its good, u had an amazing rhyme-scheme there and lyrics were top

verses sound ill, the concept it a bit too overrated but that's just my opinion, can't deny its well played tho'.. the lyrics, flow and rhymes are great, so nice job on that

the delivery is perfect, the emotion can be felt, that's good....

quality is ok, but the effects proces isn't done quite excelent... and volume of the pella is too high, but very very decent anyways...

seem's like you've been practicing for a lot now... u got what it needs... just keep makin music

& welcome to the forum lol

thank you thank you thank you for a good feedback on my track man, it is much appreciated. on the overrated part i can partially agree with you, yes its used a lot, but i think i made it mine, and didnt fall into the cliche-trap :P lol

but i agree with your criticism on vocal mixing, but im getting there, im doin everything myself so its a lot to learn bro:P

thanxs once more

and to the other feedbacks, thank you as well to you. my heart is warm with happiness:P lol

Peace
and again, this was a warm welcome indeed