6 Long Months

[DelinQuent]

a Remix to "Take A Bow" by Rhianna.

my soundclick account is currently under review for copyright infringement due to my remix to Lollipop. that's some bullshit. but either way, here's another remix... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=6530996

Lyrics-
she said no don't go, i need you here now/
and i said cut the act, go on and take a bow/
so you say ya sorry, but i still have my doubts/
and girl you gotta know, that i still love you so/
but it's time for me to go, see i'm sick of your lies/
and i'm sick of your cheatin, so look me in the eyes/
believe it i am leavin, and now you know the reason/
so do not call my phone, with useless excuses/

tell me why, is now the time/
to apollogize, girl you know it's too late/
and you cannot take away, the mistakes we both made/
after one year together, it seemed as we was fate/
but you took it all away, in a matter of a day/
we was picture perfect, tell me was he worth it?/
and now youre lookin dumb, and ugly when you're cryin/
feelin like scum and you should cause you're a liar/

it's been 6 long months, and we ain't spoke once/
and i smile when i say it, cause i don't wanna see ya

[<VerbalTouch>]

Lmao soundclick closed your account?

This track isnt badd get your ass on some new hard core tracks

[DelinQuent]

Sajjad is finishing up a chorus on a harder song from me. So look out for that soon. Its called magnetik. Thanks for the quick feedback. Its greatly appreciated

[<Stiiccy>]

ok im just gonna tell you right now i want to hear harder tracks cuzz im sick of tracks about bitches

flow was ok...not bad
lyrics were ehh werent horible tho ive seen better from you...
your quality was good...
delivery was struggling bad in this track imo...i just think you were holding back...

overall...6.5/10 cuzz i know your better than that

[Emadyville]

good shit dq, kep that shit up, and yeah finish that other track, i'm sorry but that shit is funny as shit about copyright shit

[DelinQuent]

sticcy thanks for the honest feedback, i think my delivery was off because i made this right when i woke up lol. i wanted a more toned down delivery tho so it would come across as me not caring about the girl. you feel me? lol.

thanks Dubs for the feedback.

look out for the new Magnetik track, it's gonna blow your socks off.

[<Stiiccy>]

sticcy thanks for the honest feedback, i think my delivery was off because i made this right when i woke up lol. i wanted a more toned down delivery tho so it would come across as me not caring about the girl. you feel me? lol.

thanks Dubs for the feedback.

look out for the new Magnetik track, it's gonna blow your socks off.

i wanted to be harsh cuzz i expect alot from you
ive hear your other shit and you deffintly have talent

[Xray]

cool song, just can't seem to concentrate on the song when all im thinking about is Rhianna

*slaps head* back on track, shes fucken SEXY!!

take 2 - good song man, BUT FUCK SHES SEXY!

look out for magnetik mafuckers

[dbeauluvswomen]

i never listened to much rhianna, but i just realized she has a good voice lol

anyway, this was a nice track..lyrics are perfect for the track and the way you rapped on it was cool. Not much to say about it really, smooth track...its not like i can hate on this

[B.A.D.]

the remix genious is back haha

this one in particular is hot hot hot!!!

the quality gets better by the track, lovin that

plus I love rihanna's voice haha

and is way deep, the flow is excelent.. the rhyme shceme is kinda diferent but works perfectly

great track man

[DelinQuent]

thanks for the feed everyone. it's great to hear opinions. and Axe about my quality, i keep messing with the EQ on every track trying to get it best. thanks everyone again.

[DelinQuent]

bump for some more feedback, seems everyone has gotten too into the e-beef and forgotten to give people feedback lol

[B.A.D.]

bump for some more feedback, seems everyone has gotten too into the e-beef and forgotten to give people feedback lol

lol

thats why I'm leavin that dude k block to talk all he want too, I ain't respondin to him no more

also pm'd a mod so he could close my thread... the dude wants to take it far, but I'm too lazy to keep on with that...

[Emadyville]

Yeah yo DQ let me hear that magnetik sample, shit is fire, wait for that

[Tash8]

smart ur account is getting reviewed for uploading a remix, when it specifically tells you can't without permission, and now you upload another remix...

anyways same old shit again huh? your flow is cool, the drums on the beat are awful... umm your lyrics are aite... the overlays are horrible, sometimes they dont line up right, so fix that...