Untitled Demo

[<VerbalTouch>]

Lol ignor ethe fact that i cant spell worth shi but props to Ax-D for mixing Ima do a longer version soon.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6535974

[B.A.D.]

not bad,

for a beginer is great

like I've been telling you, practice is all you need

[Tash8]

"i'm a give you a beating" -- atleast show some emotion when u say that haha dude, come on, you go make fun of siinide when u can't even rap without sounding dull as fuck.

[B.A.D.]

:laughing:

"i'm a give you a beating" -- atleast show some emotion when u say that haha dude, come on, you go make fun of siinide when u can't even rap without sounding dull as fuck.

he just startin dude

you the one that says, don't hate on threads, try to help the dude

[Tash8]

:laughing:

"i'm a give you a beating" -- atleast show some emotion when u say that haha dude, come on, you go make fun of siinide when u can't even rap without sounding dull as fuck.

he just startin dude

you the one that says, don't hate on threads, try to help the dude

i usually do offer genuine feedback, but this guy has been talking a lot of shit about siinide when just listening to his audio, he aint shit...

here's a tip: *focus on you own shit 'fore you go dissing other people, espeically people who are more lyrically talented than yourself*

[<VerbalTouch>]

:laughing:

"i'm a give you a beating" -- atleast show some emotion when u say that haha dude, come on, you go make fun of siinide when u can't even rap without sounding dull as fuck.

he just startin dude

you the one that says, don't hate on threads, try to help the dude

i usually do offer genuine feedback, but this guy has been talking a lot of shit about siinide when just listening to his audio, he aint shit...

here's a tip: *focus on you own shit 'fore you go dissing other people, espeically people who are more lyrically talented than yourself*

Dude I fuck around with k block :lauging: I laugh at forum beef and anyone that takes it serious Tash you shouldnt focus about other peoples so called E-Beef and just do your own thing.

[Tash8]

shit dude, if i actually focused on the "beef" i would be right there with big ax-d and sajjad helping them out, but i've stayed out of it because i'm cool with siinide as well.. and genius i am doing my own thing, ask mcmaybe.. me and him have been workin on something special...

you shouldnt focus about other peoples so called E-Beef and just do your own thing.

oh that's not hypocritical at all, since ur the one dissing siinide....

[<VerbalTouch>]

shit dude, if i actually focused on the "beef" i would be right there with big ax-d and sajjad helping them out, but i've stayed out of it because i'm cool with siinide as well.. and genius i am doing my own thing, ask mcmaybe.. me and him have been workin on something special...

you shouldnt focus about other peoples so called E-Beef and just do your own thing.

oh that's not hypocritical at all, since ur the one dissing siinide....

I just said i just fuck around with him ive done said hes better then me

[DelinQuent]

enough of the bitching and whining, you think magazine reviewers can rap better than the rappers they give criticism to? no, so enough of that bullshit...

you do sound extremely bored. lyrics are weak. you sound like youre saying anything just to rhyme. work on more structured stuff that makes sense. keep working, you'll get it eventually.

[Tash8]

enough of the bitching and whining, you think magazine reviewers can rap better than the rappers they give criticism to? no, so enough of that bullshit...

i dont mind critiquing genius... i always critique people, when i myself don't rap better than anyone here... the different is he didn't critique, he dissed him for being wack...

[<VerbalTouch>]

Tash all this shit is fuckin pointless as fuck you know what i wanna sound good but im not gonan put m whole life in this fucking shit.

I'm just sick of motherfuckers always trying to bring up another topic in the same thread like ou trie dto do that was alread down. I said fuck ou because k block didnt really take my feed, ok i admit i should of kept my mouth shut bt still i put my say in it, and thanks DelinQuent for your words tis whole beef shit just needs to stop or jst ignore the fuckin thread. Why's everyone gotta act al hard shit? I mean damn we on a fuckin forum ou know? I doubt half the poeple on here has even fuckin held a gun. Also no I'm not callin all of us poser's I'm just sayin damn. Enough is Enough.

I actually said that K Block was better then me. Come on dawg i said e was better then me cause I know he is. It's just the fact he was sayin shit like he ripped Big Ax-D twice on the mic that pissed me off with him. Know what I dont even know why I'm tryin ta defend all this shit its pointless non the less.

Ok so you can just skim around in that dont understand anything pm me. Other then that keep the bull shit out of this fuckin thread. I'm workin on a demo and i want honest but helpful feed so I can actually get better. i hate the kinds of feed that are like "This was baad" Or "Its getting beter" Fuck that. Every song has its flaws i wanna hear the good and bad.

I use to act hypoctrical back in my younger day's of internet forum and did all the E-beef I'ma always forum beef is pointles for these reasons.

1. You don't know the person
2. You can write a good punch line anyone that battles on a forum.in my eyes a good punch line would be doggin on how they look/what they do/and how you know them.
3. Whats the joy in it? The "oh I'm better at rapping then you"? Fuck half of us are bad on this site and were doing anything we can to get better.

Ok I could keep going on and on with this I just want the freeposting to stop and I want honest feed back. Or if this whole rant didn't make sense and i was thinking something completly different Pm me and we can chat on msn/yim/aim about it.

[B.A.D.]

guess youre right about that

[<VerbalTouch>]

a chets its all good but you can always give me more advice never hurts. Lol

[Kez]

Tash all this shit is fuckin pointless as fuck you know what i wanna sound good but im not gonan put m whole life in this fucking shit.

That was at the point i stopped reading.

If you actually want to become good at this shit, you need to put your life into it.

[<VerbalTouch>]

Tash all this shit is fuckin pointless as fuck you know what i wanna sound good but im not gonan put m whole life in this fucking shit.

That was at the point i stopped reading.

If you actually want to become good at this shit, you need to put your life into it.

You know how slim of a chance it is to actually get famous from it now das? i know that I'll never make it on any kind of stage so I'm not going to waste m life with it. If I get better yeah maybe I'll start something with it bu tif not I'ma pt the mic down in m yadult years and get a fuckin job.

And also i dont think most people here know what free posting is or the fact I said pm me or Im if you want to discuss about it