'3 Strikes' - Diss

[-SiiNiDE-]

Heh, yall thought it was for these dudes right? nawww.. for HHA.

Aight lil background info: The crew is called "Sons".
Their leader is 'da future'. "C" refers to a guy named "C-4" and "mastamind" is one of their crew members. The punches may not sound too harsh, but they're all personals. like "leave his throat all tore up and sore what??"--referring to future copping out of an audio battle claiming he sick.

Just rate the delivery/Mixing.. i mixed this one (maybe's doing one for me to drop there) i'm dropping this here to get some feed on mixing cos i blow at it

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6544210


if they didnt get the job done, i'll hit & bat clean up
grand slam ya damn fam if you wanna mean mug
i'll show you what the scheme does, so test me duke
da future's looking grim when his chest leaks through
holes pressed started from ya dress to ya shoes
I'm just adressing issues to leave you stressed & abused
& if all you do is talk, what's the purpose then?
you never hurt a track or even merked a pen
call me ringmaster way i'll work ya mens
cos ya crews more clowns... like a circus tents
future cant respond, he's got a wad to swallow
that last lines the last time C shot a hollow
leaving future's throat all tore up & sore, what??
& now that my chore's done, i control more suns (than God Apollo)
i'm doing this here just to pass the time
but how you gonna call yourself a mastamind
you sound like steve harvey when past his prime
then mixed some erkel in with a glass of wine
with those trashy lines, you're better off pantamime
I see through C too, you forum thug
*I'm the biggest antagonist for the war on drugs*
I dont doubt this dude, he might have a supresser
but i bet my life it never left his dresser

[-SiiNiDE-]

lmao, thanks man?

[Kosovic]

Who is steve harvey?

[-SiiNiDE-]

an american comedian.


http://youtube.com/watch?v=3emcCM7uKw0

[Kosovic]

Ah.

You like gypsy songs?

[-SiiNiDE-]

gypsy songs wtf, lol...

[-SiiNiDE-]

Lol i forgot to post about the song. Anyway, nice emotion, good flow, good lyrics. No complaints.

yeh yeh, i know you could make like 5 pages of what i did wrong with mxing lol.

[-SiiNiDE-]

Lol i forgot to post about the song. Anyway, nice emotion, good flow, good lyrics. No complaints.

yeh yeh, i know you could make like 5 pages of what i did wrong with mxing lol.

yeah, but thats my fault. I was supposed to mix it, I FELL ASLEEP!

lazy ass, get doing it. lol jokes... whenever man, its no rush.

[DelinQuent]

good diss. your pronunciation still sounds a little off to me, but it's not terrible and i can understand every word without the lyrics. but it's just something for you to work on. i liked the last line sayin "but i bet my life it never left his dresser" lol. good shit, keep it up.

mixing wise, i didn't hear any odd volumes, idk what to say. i guess i'm just average at mixing so i can't really tell you what to do mixing wise lol

[-SiiNiDE-]

^^^ Thanks fam. pronunciation gets slurred when i rap for some reason (it's not how i talk lol). good looks on the feed though.

[Jay-19]

Yeah, good diss. The lyrics are there, I'm feeling them. And the delivery is cool. But I didn't really liked it when you changed your voice with the line *I'm the biggest antagonist for the war on drugs*. You should probably have some other dude saying that. other than that, it's all good!

[-SiiNiDE-]

lol, thanks for the feed. When i said that line i felt kinda gay for some reason, but meh..... lmao