New Rain Matrix- It's A Wicked World

[Rain Matrix]

TRack- It's A Wicked World
Artist- Rain Matrix
Album- Recording Alot
File Type-MP3
Link-its a wicked world.mp3 - 2.85MB

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

flwo itsself is pretty okay..sometimes off beat
but now i tell you what people told me.... expanding words aint workin...like u expand a word just to keep on flow...well yeah...try to talk normal but still have a constant flow...
and about quality...well vocals are a bit quiet...and mixing could be better
but oh well...as always ur lyrics were above decent
keep it up

[Rain Matrix]

thanks I was on point for most of tha beat on a couple rhymes I ended just a bit early to accentuate them... haha I'm not always stretching words sometimes that happens naturally to suit tha multi I'm using thanks for tha feed

[lil_bayly]

yo dude no offence but that was terrible yo, it sounded like u spoke the whole song, u dont have the voice to rap, again dude no hate u wanted feedback negative or positive right, the lyrics were not so good, the beat was alright tho, maybe stick to producing!!!!

[<VerbalTouch>]

wow didn know you did audio well its not all the bad could use soem improvement still it was an ok track.

[Rain Matrix]

Tha message was supposed to be tha most important part
yeah I put it together quick and my voice was somewhat low
but it is still cool to me for a quick song... glad u guys peeped it out

[Ka0t1c]

hey, the words are great but it doesnt sound good because you dont show emotion, it seems mono tone and doesnt sound "fun". get into the track man and don't talk it, address it in a strong tone!

[DelinQuent]

really not feeling the whole stretched word thing you had going on. in my opinion just sounded dumb. flow was too slow for this beat i think. rhymes were pretty good tho. topic is good. keep working.