Down N Dirty- Ice Killa

[Requiem]

This is my first recorded audio track, so go easy on me. I produced the beat myself, mixed the vocals, everything.
i think it's alright, nothing special, because i save my best verses for my best beats. i think the hook is ok, tho.
all comments, suggestions, criticisms are appreciated. just don't say it flat out sucked, cuz i don't exactly have a million dollar studio

http://www.zshare.net/audio/16680646f9168a71/

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

actually ur flow is pretty oookay...altho it falls off a lot of times
but ur flow is not on-beat....thatz like a remix which ended up in a failure
hook is okay ...at least on beat lol
since this is ur 1st audio...keep practising man

[Robbie G]

I thought it was pretty good.

Like chris said though you voice didn't really go with the beat.

Keep at it.

[Speech]

sweet attempt (no hate) but keep trying...beat was uhm....well...special xD

and you ain had flow at all...but decent lyrics, nice....

i suggest you get on beats of soundclick and flow to those...so ur not wasting time doing a beat, that turns out...wack lol

not hating just wanna help you, step it up...might turn out alot better next time

peace

[Requiem]

lol, thanks for the feedback.

i already had the beat, i just put the verses overtop of it, so i understand it didn't flow to well. and i am trying to work on the flow thing, but i'm still only learning how to use a computer mic.
but i'm working on a new song now, and i wrote the lyrics specifically for the beat. i found out that actually listening to the beat while recording works better
thx again

[Speech]

lol, thanks for the feedback.

i already had the beat, i just put the verses overtop of it, so i understand it didn't flow to well. and i am trying to work on the flow thing, but i'm still only learning how to use a computer mic.
but i'm working on a new song now, and i wrote the lyrics specifically for the beat. i found out that actually listening to the beat while recording works better
thx again

cool

but wait a minute...you saying...you didnt listen to the beat while recording your vocals? lmao come on buddy you gotta be smarter than that...how tha hell you supossed to flow right if you ain hearing the beat while recording

ok..can't wait for your next joint hope it will be a nice one

peace