Acapella (freestyle)

[Requiem]

Well, i had a simple beat, and a mic in my hand. so u know what i did?
I made this!
http://www.zshare.net/audio/204416781f4d66ef/

i think it's pretty good for a freestyle, i might put it as a skit, or a filler track for my LP

[Raf Remix]

yr a lil off beat...but this is nice...keep it up

[Tash8]

beat is really really bad...

the last few lines u said reminded me of some eminem lines...

[Requiem]

^thx for the feedback.

i know the beat's not very good, but it's simple, and easy to rhyme over. beleive me, my real tracks are so much better beat wise

[Solace]

That was ill man!

The second line you said didnt flow with it. Took to long to say.

lol major 8 Mile ending there, bud. Beat wasnt horrible, and its not like we need to comment the beat. Your lyrics were good. It would have tooken me ages just to write that.

[Requiem]

^thx man. i was just sort of 'in the mood' (no homo) to rhyme something ill. sometimes it just takes a feeling, like a premonition. bout to put the keys into the ignition........

[<VerbalTouch>]

it was good but still your voice didnt fit wait to get older your good lyricvally but voice needs work no hate though. my honest opinion

[Solace]

it was good but still your voice didnt fit wait to get older your good lyricvally but voice needs work no hate though. my honest opinion

Hes 17 how long must he wait?

[<VerbalTouch>]

why are you dick riding him?

[Requiem]

^y u talking about dicks?

n e ways, i'm 17, i've already gone through puberty, so i'm stuck with this voice so now that u know that, how would u grade the lyrics? since my voice is pretty much done changing

EDIT: just seen that u already graded my lyrics "good lyrically" ^ thx man

[Tash8]

^y u talking about dicks?

n e ways, i'm 17, i've already gone through puberty, so i'm stuck with this voice so now that u know that, how would u grade the lyrics? since my voice is pretty much done changing

believe it or not, ur voice changes even after ur 17... u want an example? eminem...

[Requiem]

^y u talking about dicks?

n e ways, i'm 17, i've already gone through puberty, so i'm stuck with this voice so now that u know that, how would u grade the lyrics? since my voice is pretty much done changing

believe it or not, ur voice changes even after ur 17... u want an example? eminem...

^ holy sh*t ur right! i forgot about him (biggest influence in my life) and he sounded nerdy (like me) around 18, and by the time i'm 21, i might sound like him (hell yes)

thx for the encouragement tash, give me soemthing to look forward to when i'm 21, other than legally getting smashed (jk bout that)

[Xray]

your voice keeps changing but if you want quick changing, than i got one solution for ya = weed.

its not bad but yeah the beat isn't even a beat lol all its got is a snare and maybe some kicks Hmm. definitely not album quality. need a new microphone before you think about making an album. but keep doing what you do. BUT GET NEW MICROPHONE URGENTLY! cause i got a feeling its the mic thats making you sound younger than your normal voice is.

[gladimnotsoluble]

lyrics were pretty dope, had some multis.. ending was uhh. yeah eminem

and the beat was cool at first, then it just came in with that sound that was way off and it soudned terrible

[Kez]

the last few lines u said reminded me of some eminem lines...

Agreed, that was a fuckin bite if i ever saw one.