Chet Starr - Better Lose Yourself

[Robbie G]

Pretty good. I don't really like people using well known beats but it's ok for starting off.

Other than that I thought it was nice. You should get somebody to help you out with the mixing.

[Robbie G]

poison like koffing

rofl

[Solace]

Cool...The mixing was sufferable, but you should ask Ice Killa to do it, if not him then someone else here. Hes not bad with mixing. The lyrics were nice as you know ive told you before. Keep it up tho, the end product is gunna be good for sure.

[Xray]

Damn your flow is a huge improvement. Flow sounds on point badly, only thing ruined it was the overlays, cause they were out of place so it made it sound like you didn't flow right when you did. Quality is bad, but who gives a shit your trying to improve, and you are. Lyrics were dope, delivery was on point as well. Definitely improving man, keep it up.

I didn't focus on the lyrics, but damn now I read them and there some good shit bro.

[Tornado]

lyrics are impressive but overlays are WWAAAYY off and also some stutturs in some lines with some lines being longer than others left you trying to catch up to the beat. I think you need to be more agressive on the song, the way you deliever words..and maybe you shouldve doubled up your voice ad use ad-libs on this

[Boston]

well nice beat! ha nah but foreal, um quality is straight but your flow doesn't sound smooth, sounds like um a 'pausy' type of flow (i doubt thats even a word, don';t know how to explain it), lyrics arent anything special, kind of all over the place bro, you sound young lol. keep it up ill feed more next time i see you drop another track so i can compare and stuff. but everyone has potentional, dont let anyone tell you otherwise.

[theJFKshow]

You sound like you're out of breath.

[Kez]

poison like koffing

rofl

Completely.

The flow seems a bit off at the start but it kinda suits the beat when it gets into it
Lyrics and concept aint really amazing, just seems kinda random but the Koffing line won it for me
Overlays sound a bit stuttery at certain parts, and i heard a few pops but that don't matter to me

[Jay-19]

First time I've heard you rap. And it was pretty tight in my opinion.
I like your flow when the beat really starts, you know what I mean...?

Concept and lyrics could be better, but they're still okay.
Uhm, as said, flow was good, could also be better though.
And the quality needs to get better, because that was honestly bad.

But yeah, pretty good I think.
First time I heard you so I don't really have something to compare with lol.

[Emadyville]

Eh it wasn't great but I enjoyed it

[<Stiiccy>]

yo dude you have improved so much...the flow is really good...you need a new mic tho, broke mother fucker lol....

i think everything has been stated...lyrics were preety damn good to man...

[randomghost]

nice choice of beat...but i didnt like ur flow ( threw off at the start I wasn't very smart, but I'm back on your game so bring it on tart) flow is like so simple....u need to step it up a bit...lyrically ok.....am lookin forward to hear more bro

[SajN]

flow was just aight..
lyrics were cool.

First time I've heard you rap, and wanna hear more But get a better mic first

Nice

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

ur delievery has potential dude...better mic and it shows off more
flow was aight..can get better tho...and rhyme sheme was different...and not that great...dont know wutchu was goin for but didnt work for me at least
but as i said...delievery got potential

[Requiem]

lmao i love ur voice. u got a good flow, u just need somewhat better quality, and watch the mic bumps. subject matter/ lyrics = sick. i liked it, i mean, it's kinda random, but suits the song.
lmao at lose urself beat.

i'll mix it, don't u worry. we're going to make a Sick Track out of this. once it's done. i can get my verse done like next week.