**C-Riz-42Bars Of Murder!!**

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yes people im back in the biz...
....more C-Riz material to drop....on fire! ha
so as the title says i dropped 42bars straight...BOOM!
enough talking here's the link

C-Riz - 42Bars Of Murder
http://www.zshare.net/audio/566298023906fe59/

enjoy...feed is appreciated

[Xray]

Haha punchlines were nice man, lyrics were pretty dope man. Flow was nice, bouncy shit. Didn't feel the delivery though, you didn't mean what you were saying, sounded like you were bored, needed energy on this type of beat. But the lyrics were nice man, you stepped up no doubt. Gotta work on your delivery though.

[Tornado]

^Agreed, you should re-record it, more aggresively on this beat but this is actually better than most of your stuff. Except for A***** ** *****

[enjinn]

yeah, this was nice...cool flow and some nice lines...not bad

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx guyz..much appreciated as for my defense...my voice was still a lil fucked cuz i was ill a week ago..still no excuse haha thx again

[Slim Zaddy]

yup man , i love this one , you had some great lines , lyrics are just sick , rhymes too as well . but as Xray said it seems that you was bored or somethin , i did't feel your voice, there is no energy in it , your flow and delivery are great , maybe as said if you record it again it will be much better ,, wait till you relief then do it again ,, but it's good , keep it up

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thank you z_em...glad you liked it..guess i will re-record it for y'all lol...

[MC Anonymous]

Some nice stuff by C-Riz.

Delivery was coherent, so I was able to understand the words, big improvment. Flow was slightly choppy, but not that much, nothing to serious. Lyrics were nice as usual, and the beat choice was nice. I would give it a 8/10. Nice shit man

[Nu Syd]

nice song man, i like your flow on this,sliped a few times but it was solid, lyrics pretty good to, nice one doood

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx for checkin to both

[Ka0t1c]

nice 8/10 - feed was already given by others which i agree on

[randomghost]

WOOW C-riz...the shit is masterd and mixed hot nice gangsta shit....lovin the flow good energitic lyrics.am feelin it good shit...accent and pronunciation is much much better...good stuff

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thank you
@random..lol i had the feeling like my vocals were a bit too loud but if you say its good thx again koatic and random

[TripleNineThree]

I liked the way you were flowin to this it was sick and it went perfect with it. The flow and lyrics were both A+ couldn't get any better they were great! The only thing I had a prob with was the delivery, you had emotion behind the lyrics there was just something missing, i'm not sure what it was, maybe its because you did it all in one take i'm not sure. You should re-record it and up the hype behind your lyrics, the emotions there just make them more hype, and the punchlines were sick, keep it up fam!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thank you man....appreciate it....
i was fightin with myself if i do it all in one take or do more takes...since i think its kinda cheating sometimes if a verse consists of more than one take but yeah will re-record it soon....when my voice is 100% again ... thx again homie