Nick. Y.feat Alex-So high

[Nick. Y]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zh9hHMTiIHw

Yo what up everybody, this is my first demo song.I know it's far from perfect,but I guess it's a good start.Anyway.. what's your opinion about it ?

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

ur pronouncation is bad... hook could turn out way better with some wicked mixing...but the idea was good...flow was allright didnt bother me much...
but u right way to go for you keep at it

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

chorus was, sorta weird, good idea but could have used a bit more pressence.


pronouncation is not good. its your accent i get that, i got the same problem, but it could be alot clearer. sorta sounds like your not expressing your words enough. a good trick is to rap your rap with a pen in your mouth, if you can spit it clear with a pen in your mouth when you spit it normal your pronouncation and definition of each word is alot better. alot fo your words blend together as if they are all the one word.


lyrics were ok, simple but you flowed across it nice.


the beat was different and i like different, it worked for the concept.

[Vettori]

actually when i heard the chorus.. i thought it was gonna be decent.. not to demote u here, but when u started rappin it sorta fell off...u do need alot of work...and ur accent is something ur gonna need to learn to work with better.... I enjoyed the hook, and as chris said if mixed properly coulda been cool, But even on the chorus yu sounded bored..Soometimes it's hard to show expression on a track, especially if the quality lacks....Hmm decent stuff...Still below average..but im sure if u work at it..u can get alot better...

work on one thing at a time.. to get better...

first - pronunciation Just do ur best cause this will be the hard part
-then flow- best practiceing method for this, is freestyling.. u can really test how far ur voice can go.. and this also helps expression..especially if ur freestyling and not thinkin about it...u may say some fucked up things...that really make no sense...but yull be surprised with how much it can help.

keep at it man...maybe one day sometime soon.. i'll be getting refferred to hear some "Nick Y"
Cause his flow and delivery as fuckin sick haha...

keep at it man it only gtes better... and, eventually easier...especially if u record alot

[Nick. Y]

thanks for the advices. Many people think I sing the chorus too but it's not me it's this guy Alex featuring the song.This was indeed my first song ,not even recorded in a studio and I was very nervous while we were doing it , it's clear that my accent is bad and I can do much better with the flow.Still I'm glad you all didn't bespattered the track, 'cause in my country other people did just that and I told them to eat a fat cock.I don't like how many of them bastards know only how to hate, if it was up to me I'd beat the shit out of them all.I'm glad you people are different