Mc Zu - Onslaught III

[mcZu]

The quality is not the best, so bear with me. All feedback is appreciated.



Mc Zu - Onslaught III

You wished you had this, skill I have it’s
Past vivid, it’s just a course I mastered
Of course it matters just like Hailey’s dad
So maybe I’m just bad, sailing past
The borders with a flow that’s far from trash
Snatching away your chance on winning call Zu Porter
I mean I’m the man so I’m bringing torture
With a torch on my tongue, spitting heat
The game revolvers around me ‘cause I’m the after math
Revolver on me, I astound like an after blast
My sound is an inglorious bastard set
To start from the top of the head
Ask Gabriel, I’m top five, leaving/living or dead
I top the living and the dead, the truth is in my bars
Then-tell how I am in the booth like Weezy escaping bars
Take it easy...

[Ticalrecords]

it was good dude, u owned the moment, per say

haha at first i thot ur flow was completely off but then i realized i had a diff instrumental playing on my itunes. and damn i hav a line about weezy escaping bars too

[BabyBLue91]

Nice! I like how your accent sounds when you rap

[S0 R3@L]

firstly the eminem/aftermath dick lick makes me sick,seriously stop.If you like the artist let it show in the way you express you own version of rap rather then use it to express your love for the man.It makes you sound like one of them bible bashers with uncut hair and cardboard wrapped round their dirty backs.

Your accent could really work if you worked on it a lil more.

Not bad but once i heard em/aftermath my ears told you to stfu

[mcZu]

it was good dude, u owned the moment, per say

haha at first i thot ur flow was completely off but then i realized i had a diff instrumental playing on my itunes. and damn i hav a line about weezy escaping bars too

Haha, thanks. Appreciate it.

Nice! I like how your accent sounds when you rap

Thank you BabyBlue. Appreciate it.

firstly the eminem/aftermath dick lick makes me sick,seriously stop.If you like the artist let it show in the way you express you own version of rap rather then use it to express your love for the man.It makes you sound like one of them bible bashers with uncut hair and cardboard wrapped round their dirty backs.

Your accent could really work if you worked on it a lil more.

Not bad but once i heard em/aftermath my ears told you to stfu

You didn't understand that punhc I guess, The Game just got resigned to Aftermath, hence that punch. But thanks for checking it out, appreciate the feed.

[Almostlity]

firstly the eminem/aftermath dick lick makes me sick,seriously stop.If you like the artist let it show in the way you express you own version of rap rather then use it to express your love for the man.It makes you sound like one of them bible bashers with uncut hair and cardboard wrapped round their dirty backs.

Your accent could really work if you worked on it a lil more.

Not bad but once i heard em/aftermath my ears told you to stfu

we don't believe you, you need more people.

[S0 R3@L]

we don't believe you, you need more people.

now in english please....

[Just Silver]

it says i have to download some plug in im using Sea Monkey as a browser

[mcZu]

it says i have to download some plug in im using Sea Monkey as a browser

It's just Zshare
If you want me to, I can upload it on youtube.

[Almostlity]

we don't believe you, you need more people.

now in english please....

[Tornado]

Well i'm telling you on MSN now so you know what i think

[AliJack]

And so the doors shall open to Zu's career of punching rappers DEAD in their tracks on his collabs. Pow.

[mcZu]

Well i'm telling you on MSN now so you know what i think

Yeah, thanks for the online feed, appreciate it.

And so the doors shall open to Zu's career of punching rappers DEAD in their tracks on his collabs. Pow.

Word, AliJack knows what's up. Thanks for checking though bro.

[Mr. Chambers]

lyrically was good...
flow...was sloppy....especially on a beat like this...you want it to be faster paced and kinda swing from bar to bar
you slurred alot.....

i think if you practice more you'll be able to make this song better

[Arabian Shady]

lyrically was good...
flow...was sloppy....especially on a beat like this...you want it to be faster paced and kinda swing from bar to bar
you slurred alot.....

i think if you practice more you'll be able to make this song better

i agree with this 100%

the lyrics were dope brotha, the flow sounded like you had ALOT of spit in your mouth.
Good beat tho, keep it coming homie