Change The World

[DelinQuent]

So as many of you know, I have a baby girl on the way. This song is basically for her.

It's been a long time since i've been behind the mic, i'm a bit rusty.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/72620667336bc797/

[DelinQuent]

thanks man, i appreciate the quick feed. i'll try to PM you a few older tracks when i have some time.

[Most-Hated]

Mehh didn't really like it cuzz it sound's like a gangster trying to do christian music...

I thought the flow was good for the most part but it was to babyish for my taste...

I think you accomplished what you were trying to pull off (that poppish bubblegum sound)...
So really the soung itself is good, because you got the point across and you got the tune across..

Basically this would appeal to right listener..(Girls, little kids)

But deff. not something that I would listen to and I doubt you would yourself because your music goes harder than that...

SO props, good lyrics, right vibe, tight flow...

Good job man

[DelinQuent]

actually, my music doesn't go much harder.

I'm not about all the violent being a hardass type of music. I'm more into deeper things, like emotions and relationships. Occasionally i'll go hard, not often.

Thanks for the feed, sorry it's not what your into, but i respect that, to each there own, again, thanks

[classthe_king]

Yo, i thought this was dope and you pulled it off nicely. Like Most-hated it isn't really my style, but i like that you did this for your daughter.

I'd like to hear some of your old stuff too

[Most-Hated]

actually, my music doesn't go much harder.

I'm not about all the violent being a hardass type of music. I'm more into deeper things, like emotions and relationships. Occasionally i'll go hard, not often.

Thanks for the feed, sorry it's not what your into, but i respect that, to each there own, again, thanks

Btw the mixing and quality were very nice

[DelinQuent]

myspace.com/iamdelinquent has a little bit of older stuff.

I'll be back soon full-time. Tax return gets deposited tomorrow so i'll be purchasing a new interface and mic. "Going, Going, Gone." is on it's way.

[Most-Hated]

myspace.com/iamdelinquent has a little bit of older stuff.

I'll be back soon full-time. Tax return gets deposited tomorrow so i'll be purchasing a new interface and mic. "Going, Going, Gone." is on it's way.

I know Ive heard it...Nice tunes man

Anyway, how far along is the kid

[DelinQuent]

Thanks.

Due June 12th, so almost 6 months.

[Most-Hated]

Thanks.

Due June 12th, so almost 6 months.

So you with the chick? Or was it one of those 1 night slip up kinna deals?

[DelinQuent]

nah she's straight, we have an apartment together. So everything is all good lol

[Most-Hated]

nah she's straight, we have an apartment together. So everything is all good lol

haha word man... well hope that all works out for ya

[Tash8]

this reminds me of Life by Royce...it's dope..
i like the hook but it could have used more

good verses.

[DelinQuent]

thanks for the feed guys, i seriously appreciate it.

Anyone else who wants to feed, i'd appreciate it.

[Mr. Chambers]

chorus was fucking awesome....tbh it was the highlight of the track

beat is ok...not really my type of beat...too "southern" sounding

1st verse...pretty good verse....good flow...good delivery and good content..

2nd verse....not as good as the 1st verse....was only average.....the flow was kinda meh.......content was good

overall i really like this shit...prolly make it onto my zune...(y)....

scream @ me sometime for a collab if you down....