Mc Zu - D-One

[mcZu]

A verse over the Slaughterhouse - The One beat. Feedback is appreciated.

Mc Zu - D-One

Getting an L in score is thin, I stopped, you shook
You feel like Elin Nordegren how you wished you knocked on woods
I knock ’em over, they’re blocked, I could
Flow all day, you not, maybe stagnant
Zu losing is like telling if an obese lady is pregnant
I prep the end and make sure you’re shaking like Haiti
You’re just a remake, I gotta turn you down like Jay-Z
Let’s say, mi amore is Hip Hop, do you want more?
Should I back mask my vocals so you can hear me roar?
I rather go to war with my fists, and then shift
Your body parts clock wise, and then sip
Some scotch, right, while walking ‘round watching you doing the back flip
I’m back with lyrics, you people are just wack
You’re face is like an African school system, e’rything around your pupil is black

[_Ironic_]

ahhh, love this beat

hmmm, not feeling the delivery at all on this...needs major work..you just dont sound confident enough

the flow of it was pretty solid, ill give u points for that..lyrically this was pretty dope as well

it was decent for how short it was, i'd like to see you get more serious though, you sound like u could make a killer track if u put more effort into it

overall 6.5/10 (mostly because of how short it is)

return the favor if u can bro:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=80201

[Kosovic]

That was like meh. Bad delivery, badly recorded vocals, the mix reminded me of my mixing 5 years ago, yeah that bad. And finally there is no essense in your lyrics, its nothing interesting to catch the ear. Too bad. 1/10.

[mcZu]

ahhh, love this beat

hmmm, not feeling the delivery at all on this...needs major work..you just dont sound confident enough

the flow of it was pretty solid, ill give u points for that..lyrically this was pretty dope as well

it was decent for how short it was, i'd like to see you get more serious though, you sound like u could make a killer track if u put more effort into it

overall 6.5/10 (mostly because of how short it is)

return the favor if u can bro:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=80201

Thanks for the feed, 'preciate it.

That was like meh. Bad delivery, badly recorded vocals, the mix reminded me of my mixing 5 years ago, yeah that bad. And finally there is no essense in your lyrics, its nothing interesting to catch the ear. Too bad. 1/10.

Thanks for listening Coccoa, 'preciate it.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

lyrical you held your own as usual..
delivery is a step up from the previous work...just as ironic said...try to be more confident/cocky
i actually think the flow was way off
and quality oh well...cant blame you really i guess

[Mr. Chambers]

That was like meh. Bad delivery, badly recorded vocals, the mix reminded me of my mixing 5 years ago, yeah that bad. And finally there is no essense in your lyrics, its nothing interesting to catch the ear. Too bad. 1/10.

^i kinda agree with kos...i wouldn't give it 1/10 tho....thats to harsh

i've listened to some of your verse..and the ones i can remember have been 1 16 full of punchlines/puns...which is cool...but try to expand yourself dude......you got the potential......just gotta learn to break through the ceilings.......

[mcZu]

lyrical you held your own as usual..
delivery is a step up from the previous work...just as ironic said...try to be more confident/cocky
i actually think the flow was way off
and quality oh well...cant blame you really i guess

Thanks for checking, I don't think the flow was way off though. But thanks for the feed.

i've listened to some of your verse..and the ones i can remember have been 1 16 full of punchlines/puns...which is cool...but try to expand yourself dude......you got the potential......just gotta learn to break through the ceilings.......

Yeah, I know what you're saying. But the thing is, I'm focusing on improving my flow and delivery so there is no point in making real songs right now, at least that's the way I see it. I have more than enough real song material or at least something with more substance than these playfull verses I've been dropping lately in my notebook. This is a just a form of practicing, these verses are a product of boredom and written in 7-8 min tops.

But thanks for checking man, appreciate the input.