.::Rapper's Fairytale::.

[Tash8]

.::Rapper's Fairytale::.

[*]Listen/Download:
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[*][Lyrics:
story time, close your eyes and listen
it's the life any rapper wants to live in

I wake up one morning, the clock said six
ring ring on the phone who the fuck is this
if another prank call, i'ma pop these kids
"yeah hello who's this? why's you calling?
it's not even six, couldn't you till the morning?"
told me no and she kept on speaking
what she was saying made my heart start beating
long story short is i'm finally signed
these muhafuckin labels finally opened up they eyes
gave me a chance and a shot at redemption
gave 'em a song, got these ladies sexxin'
i guess then a sad price I paid, a lesson
if not they'll yap, so it's backwards pay
next thing I know is i'm rocking out shows
the money on the tables, and the ho's on the floor
thought it was perfect but little did I know

[chorus]
fairytales, there's no such thing
a rapper's dream looks oh so dim
finding peace, if and only when
I grab me a pen and I start rapping
(so) learn from me, it's the way we play
there's no such thing as a fairytale
no no such thing as a fairytale
ain't no such thing as a fairytale


now i'm living this life full of luxuries
and all of these bitches and hoes wanna fuck wit me
yeah right, try your luck with me, yeah it's not easy no
fuck all the hating, for the sake of hating
well great then, I patiently waited to make it in
but i'm going at this tempo and you change it's cadences
takes a whole lotta of shit 'fore they feeling ur crap
i see it how it is, I'm seated back
when you sell yourself to rap, you ain't never coming back
you ain't never coming back

[chorus]

[bridge]
there ain't no fiction this life of a rapper
what you saying is like how it happened
i'ma tell you, just one more time
there's no such thing like the life in your mind
there ain't no fiction this life of a rapper
what you saying is like how it happened
i ain't telling you, never again
the life of a rapper is better for pretend

[chorus]

back to reality, i'm struck by a dream
but i'm not giving up, no I won't let me
if you ain't feeling the same
then your gonna have trouble playing me in the game
it's all it really takes, see it's all in the heart
but these cardiac arrested dudes are fucked
aim for the sky and start shooting at the stars
don't fall far behind and you'll find me at mars

[gutawafang]

man, i felt the bridge the most man. i like how it linked to the chorus. nice song.

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

I don't know. It's good songwriting over a good beat, but it came off as corny to me.
I gotta be honest, the chorus annoyed me.
The flow was really good from a technical aspect, but I don't think the deadbeat, monotone flow really fit the style of the track.
It's definitely not a bad song though. Lyrically and technique wise, it was amazing, I just don't think it all came together to form a complete song like it should have.

[Mr. Chambers]

i already gave you my thoughts on msn....not a bad song...i think if your flow was a lil more perfected this would be a classic...but overall its not bad

[Tash8]

I don't know. It's good songwriting over a good beat, but it came off as corny to me.
I gotta be honest, the chorus annoyed me.
The flow was really good from a technical aspect, but I don't think the deadbeat, monotone flow really fit the style of the track.
It's definitely not a bad song though. Lyrically and technique wise, it was amazing, I just don't think it all came together to form a complete song like it should have.

hmm...early in the recording stages, i had a version where i'm more upbeat and I changed my pitch a lot more..felt it took the serious lyrics and made them sound too happy. I didn't like it, so I rerecorded more like this. Guess I shoulda went with that...oh well too bad... thanks though.. I understand what u saying

man, i felt the bridge the most man. i like how it linked to the chorus. nice song.

thx bro

[Slim Zaddy]

not a bad song ,, i enjoyed it ,, actually , lyrics, were deep , i liked ya chorus , its sounds , nice,, but i did'nt like ya flow here, ya had much better flow ,, but , overlall ,, it's a good song ,, keep em commin bro

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

as chambers said you flow wasnt really perfect..you did a expand your words just to fit it
and the hook itsself is great i like the rhyme sheme and the pace and everything BUT you cant sing..
lyrics are kool... u hold it down on that category..
delivery was not bad and not special either....
mixing...vocals up..i dont know if its your speakers..and you think its volumed (?) right or what not but i always hear your vocals too low...so yeah...definitly keep at it

[Tash8]

as chambers said you flow wasnt really perfect..you did a expand your words just to fit it
and the hook itsself is great i like the rhyme sheme and the pace and everything BUT you cant sing..
lyrics are kool... u hold it down on that category..
delivery was not bad and not special either....
mixing...vocals up..i dont know if its your speakers..and you think its volumed (?) right or what not but i always hear your vocals too low...so yeah...definitly keep at it

i hear it perfectly fine thru my beats headphones

[mcZu]

I don't think that the vocals are low, mixing sounds perfectly fine to me..

That said, your flow is not 100% smooth. Sounds off at some spots. Delivery sounds, well, okay to me, but I feel like you could get more out of your voice. You know, a bit more of emotion when you say a certain line, makes your delivery sound a lot better.

Lyrics are simple, yet great. Love the message in it. Beat is not bad.

Your quality is good.

Overall I enjoyed listening to it, but those things I pointed out are things you could/should work on.

[Tash8]

I don't think that the vocals are low, mixing sounds perfectly fine to me..

That said, your flow is not 100% smooth. Sounds off at some spots. Delivery sounds, well, okay to me, but I feel like you could get more out of your voice. You know, a bit more of emotion when you say a certain line, makes your delivery sound a lot better.

Lyrics are simple, yet great. Love the message in it. Beat is not bad.

Your quality is good.

Overall I enjoyed listening to it, but those things I pointed out are things you could/should work on.

thx bro

[Nick. Y]

The flow sounded kinda boring, the singing on the chorus doesn't fit pretty well i guess .. On the other hand the track is very well mixed, the beat is nice and the lyrics are creative

[Tash8]

thx bro