(thanks to Young Fire for helping me out with the auto-tune) Tash drops a hot!! verse.... hope you guys enjoy 
(thanks to Young Fire for helping me out with the auto-tune) Tash drops a hot!! verse.... hope you guys enjoy 





°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:haha nice use of autotune..was mixed well
not sure if it fits you 100% but its somthin different and im kool with it
altho i thought tash came weak...no flow no attitude no delivery...sorry tash..
waitin for the full version
and thanks for the feed man 


°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:altho i thought tash came weak...no flow no attitude no delivery...sorry tash..









oh and the hook came with the beat, lol



Solace wrote:Tash: Amazing, AMAZING hook, and decent verse
Ruthless - Loved the verse actually, enjoyed the autotune for once

Tash8 wrote:Solace wrote:Tash: Amazing, AMAZING hook, and decent verse
Ruthless - Loved the verse actually, enjoyed the autotune for once
wasn't my hook hahaha...fuckk


I didn't get why you bothered trying to do that, it didn't help the flow at all and just made you sound like you was speaking rather then flowing. The rhymes were good, better then Ruthless, enunciation was good, the overlays however were not lined up COMPLETELY. 2 times I heard a slip up. It's all good though cause it didn't take anything away from the verse, but it's always good to notice such things so the next time you can notice it too. Good verse.LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..



MC Anonymous wrote:Tash went in! He would've aced this track perfectly if not for one thing... WTF were those pauses for?I didn't get why you bothered trying to do that, it didn't help the flow at all and just made you sound like you was speaking rather then flowing. The rhymes were good, better then Ruthless, enunciation was good, the overlays however were not lined up COMPLETELY. 2 times I heard a slip up. It's all good though cause it didn't take anything away from the verse, but it's always good to notice such things so the next time you can notice it too. Good verse.

MC Anonymous wrote:This is a very boring song. I HATED the autotune during the verse, shit was horrible lol. The chorus utilized autotune way better. Good chorus.
Ruthless came weird on it due to the autotune and the way he was rapping it, I didn't hear much lyrical dexterity at all so it didn't peak my interest at all. Flow wise it was solid, nothing amazing but nothing was lacking. Decent verse.
Tash went in! He would've aced this track perfectly if not for one thing... WTF were those pauses for?I didn't get why you bothered trying to do that, it didn't help the flow at all and just made you sound like you was speaking rather then flowing. The rhymes were good, better then Ruthless, enunciation was good, the overlays however were not lined up COMPLETELY. 2 times I heard a slip up. It's all good though cause it didn't take anything away from the verse, but it's always good to notice such things so the next time you can notice it too. Good verse.
Mixing on this was good, however, the mixing for Ruthless' verse with the autotune was GARBAGEEEEEE. Could've done without it.
6/10 track.
and yeah, its not my best lyrical wise.. so dont worry about that, lol.. and i see you didnt like the auto-tune.. im not a big fan of auto-tune myself, but i just wanted to try it, haha.. thanks for the feed man, really appreciate it 


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