On My Own

[Tash8]

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9707245

hope u enjoy

let's fly thru the clouds, tell me how that sounds
if we can't all be stars then we'll settle for the clouds
a house with a spouse, let me settle all doubts
i'm unloading unfolding and going all out
at the end of the day though, i try to ssee the payroll
riding in a grey ghost, seeing how they day goes
my thoughts bi polar like how a sin wave goes
i stay home n lay low, smoking GDP taking shots of the cuervo
it's my time to shine, so i try to rhyme
but sometimes i can't find, the right verbs to rhyme
the words or the courage to unearth these lines
can't find a right style ,can't find a mellow me mood
so it soothes, suits me
the ace of the hearts if you knew me, you knew he'd
never let up, fuck that
excuse me, pardon my french i just find it amusing


I wait for hot gas to explode in the sky
so i climb a shooting star on my own when i fly
ride thru space and burn til i die
i'm on the verge of explosion, it's my time
on my own
on my own when i fly
on my own
on my own when i die
on my own
on my own when i fly
on my own
on my own every single day n night

Im always wanting more like demi
and i wonder if i ever sold like nelly
would they tell me
you should stop while ahead
but i'd rather going, run miles instead
they can lock me up go ahead try n stop me
but i've always got the code like armani (code)
go ahaed you can call me a bitch
but watch me turn around n leave a puncture in ur ribs
my lifes been spinning like a playing dvd
but this ain't a movie, ya'll didn't pay to see
make your way to me, it's a painting you'll never see
a blunt n this beats the only thing that settles me
you can hear how settling
i'm high enough in the sky to strike an aerial assault
these words of the wise and i cannot get enough
where we been, where we from
wont matter as much as what we'll become

[Robbie G]

That was brilliant. Did you make the beat? I loved it.

I'd like the quality to be a little better but it wasn't bad.

[Jay-19]

I got this beat too and was about to record on it, but now I might not, cuz I hate when people use the same beat as I'm about to use... so fuck you Tash!

Naah, but for real... this is nice man.
You got the flow going and the delivery too.
I can't believe how much progress you've made since I first heard you... shit is crazy man.
Lyrics are sweet, I'm feeling them..

Overall, really chill track man.

[classthe_king]

I thought this was alright. Not really my style of track. The first verse the better verse. The second verse's flow seemed off for me, I didn't like it much. Overall its a good song, but you've done better.

[Tash8]

thx for the feed guys

[Mc Cubz]

yes yes this is good stuff!

[Tash8]

yes yes this is good stuff!

thx man

[Tash8]

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tracks sick man, hook is defiantly the strongest part really sick work on it.

your delivery on the verses isnt great to the contrast of the hook imo, and the verses dont live up the hook, they feel there and are spacing out the time till the hook come in.

there in no means bad i just feel as if you dont take advantage of the hook you layed, first verse is the stronger, second is good but not as engaging.

and you have lack luster delivery on some words i think you were tyring to give the chill casual delivery till the hook hit in but at times it felt lazy instead of "casual".

know you wouldnt appreciate simple "sick song" feed.

but still its a track ill listen to since you are in the few select on the site that still make it into my "day to day playlist" when im like tdying up and shit lol

great song, but if you tightened up what i mentioned above it could be excellent.

[Tash8]

tracks sick man, hook is defiantly the strongest part really sick work on it.

your delivery on the verses isnt great to the contrast of the hook imo, and the verses dont live up the hook, they feel there and are spacing out the time till the hook come in.

there in no means bad i just feel as if you dont take advantage of the hook you layed, first verse is the stronger, second is good but not as engaging.

and you have lack luster delivery on some words i think you were tyring to give the chill casual delivery till the hook hit in but at times it felt lazy instead of "casual".

know you wouldnt appreciate simple "sick song" feed.

but still its a track ill listen to since you are in the few select on the site that still make it into my "day to day playlist" when im like tdying up and shit lol

great song, but if you tightened up what i mentioned above it could be excellent.

fasho man, i understand..daren was telling me kinda the same thing about my delivery not fitting well with the beat.which is understandable, but i recorded this at my dudes studio so i didn't want it it's good quality to go to waste, naw mean?

[B.A.D.]

great beat choice man, I like it

damn man, your writing is brilliant... extremely good lyrics, I think your best so far.

Wow, I dare to say that this is your best track to date. really.

there very little to give feedback about, cuz also the hook is magnificent...

All the effects you added like the echoes here and there and the general mixing is very clean. wonderfull really.
only maybe add an extra layovers to your voice so you give them more power. and BAM!

Delivery

The flow tho... too damn basic, a bit to gentle u know?... it goes well and smooth but I think you would like to spice it up a bit. Specially on the second verse cuz it gets a bit too less exiting, even if you compensate it great with the lyrics.

and.. damn this is good hahaha, yeah, there's not much to feed, only congratulate man, this was awsome, I feel proud of ya, great evolution.

amazing lyrics. you dont need to use complex words to get into a great methaphorical stance.


10/10

[Tash8]

great beat choice man, I like it

damn man, your writing is brilliant... extremely good lyrics, I think your best so far.

Wow, I dare to say that this is your best track to date. really.

there very little to give feedback about, cuz also the hook is magnificent...

All the effects you added like the echoes here and there and the general mixing is very clean. wonderfull really.
only maybe add an extra layovers to your voice so you give them more power. and BAM!

Delivery

The flow tho... too damn basic, a bit to gentle u know?... it goes well and smooth but I think you would like to spice it up a bit. Specially on the second verse cuz it gets a bit too less exiting, even if you compensate it great with the lyrics.

and.. damn this is good hahaha, yeah, there's not much to feed, only congratulate man, this was awsome, I feel proud of ya, great evolution.

amazing lyrics. you dont need to use complex words to get into a great methaphorical stance.


10/10

thx man, glad you like this.

[mceddie]

Everything was really awesome man, the beat is sick, your flow was good, although it coulda been a little tighter towards the end, it was still really good. keep it up man!

if you have time, please rtf

[Nick. Y]

the beat was very deep, I liked the chorus, 'cause it sounded pretty catchy. Lyrics were original, decent flow, but I feel as you didn't put enough emotion and voice presence in certain places from the verses.I appeal to the track, been following your songs for a while, you're dropping some fly shit

[Tash8]

thx guys