Phantom-If I Died Tonight

[Phantom]

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9739642

http://www.zshare.net/audio/814254185d3a45de/

let me know what you guys think

[Mr. Chambers]

3) One link of feedback you have given will need to be posted before you post a song.

[Solace]

This is fucking tight! Damn, the hook is sickkkk Great work Phantom. As usual? Haha.

[Phantom]

thanks guys, i appreciate that alot. ashez, i usually just write a verse cus i cant write anymore after i get the one verse out. but im glad you guys like it, and chambers, with the effort it took to post that reminder you could have just checked out the song, and yes i realize your the new mod. i fed this track viewtopic.php?f=38&t=99720

[Mr. Chambers]

thanks guys, i appreciate that alot. ashez, i usually just write a verse cus i cant write anymore after i get the one verse out. but im glad you guys like it, and chambers, with the effort it took to post that reminder you could have just checked out the song, and yes i realize your the new mod. i fed this track http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=99720

or you coulda posted it then i wouldn't need to ask......

yo, can i do a verse to this?

[B.A.D.]

What effect did you use on the hook??? sounds like a autotune with distrortion. but made in a good ass way hahaha. am I correct? if not, I'd love to know cuz sounds sick

damn, I think I finnaly found someone that makes hooks better than me lol, jk haha. but damn man

the only thing I dont like about your tracks is that they are too short. and this track hase xtreme good potential man, so finish them, this is hot

[Phantom]

thanks everyone. ashez hell yea man id love to get on a beat of urs. ax, its a pitch correction filter, i usually use it lightly on hooks but this time i used it for kind of an effect.

[mceddie]

thanks everyone. ashez hell yea man id love to get on a beat of urs. ax, its a pitch correction filter, i usually use it lightly on hooks but this time i used it for kind of an effect.

hey man, i'd love to produce some tracks for you, you're fantastic! hit me up man!

[Mr. Chambers]

or ignore my question, thats cool too.

thought it was a good song, but way to short.

[classthe_king]

Chambers on this track would be sick

[Phantom]

thanks eddie ill definitely get at you and chambers ill get at you on the pm about getting an open verse 4 u. class_theking did you like it? let me know man and to everyone i know my songs are short but thats usually how it is, if i wrote more verses it feels like im going over the same thing that i already did and i end up scrapping it.

[Mr. Chambers]

^you just need to know how to go over your thoughts in more detail, but without it being stretched out or repetitive.

like for instance, if you writing about a break up. instead of just being straight to the point and saying "it hurts my heart to lose you", add onto it. go over the event, thoughts going through your head, emotions, comparisons, metaphors, similes, background info. Your too talented to let this type of problem effect you.

if you feel like you wrote as much as you could about the topic, and it still falls short, then consider making your songs a little more open ended so you can add onto the content only using different situations, thoughts, or stories.

[Phantom]

chambers i really appreciate the advice man im gonna definitely incorporate what you said into the next few songs i start to write and thanks for calling me talented as well. everyones comments mean alot

[classthe_king]

Yeah it was amazing...lol

[Phantom]

thanks i appreciate you saying that. i got motivation to get better tho someone heard this track and said pretty harsh things about it.