I was thinking about this today and actually, his verse is quite good technically.
The verse definantly picks up near the end and is jammed with multi-syllable rhyming. Italics are generally the internal rhyming but also rhymes with other parts of the verse.
then tell me how ugly I am, but that you’ll always love me
then after that, shove me, in the aftermath of the
destructive path that we’re on, two psychopaths but we
know that no matter how many knives we put in each other’s backs
that we’ll have each other’s backs, ’cause we’re that lucky
And near the end:
you hit me twice, yeah, but who’s countin’
I may have hit you three times, I’m startin’ to lose count
but together, we’ll live forever, we found the youth fountain
our love is crazy, we’re nuts, but I refused counselin’
Thoughts on this verse?
Personally I think it's a solid verse and very underrated.