Niggaz that take no for an answer, get told no
Yeah I been told no but it was more like, "No, no, no!!!"
clever line, yes. lazy rhyming, yes.
Life a bitch that'll fuck you if you let her
Better come better than better to be a competitor
cliche lifes a bitch line, corny self improvement line.
this vet is ahead of,
The shit is all redder, you deader and deader
A medic instead-a the cheddars and credda
Settle vendetta one metal beretta from ghetto to ghetto
Evidence? NOPE! Never leave a shred-of
so this vet is ahead of red shit, where the fuck does a medic come from? maybe he should have mentioned a beretta first & then the medic so it atleast made what he was trying to say more clear. also extremely lazy & forced rhyming.
I got the soul of every rapper in me, love me or hate me
My moms got raped by the industry and made me
1st line is filler, second line is a good line but once again horrible rhyming.
I'm the illest nigga ever, I told you
I get more pussy than them dyke bitches Total
illest nigga ever? not even fucking close this is like Lil Wayne calling himself the best rapper alive. Outdated pop culture reference, check. More lazy forced rhyming, check.
Want beef, nigga? PBBT! You better dead that shit
My name should be "Can't-Believe-That-Nigga-Said-That-Shit"
Yes I do want beef, this wackness is making me hungry. You forgot a word, it should be "Can't-Believe-That-Nigga-Said-That-Wack-Shit" . Also once again horrible rhyming.
Probably sayin, "He ain't a killer", but I'm killin myself
Smoke death, fuck bitches raw, on the kitchen floor
this killin myself bar doesn't even rhyme with anything & it's an all around shitty line. fuck bitches raw on the kitchen floor is the first line that I not only like but also has good rhyming because of how he flows it.
So think what I'ma do to you, have done to you
Got niggaz in my hood who'd do that shit for a blunt or two
so are you gonna do it or are you just gonna have it done? make up your fucking mind.
do it for a blunt? you mean crackheads
good job finally starting to rhyme impressively though
What you wanna do, cocksuckers? We glock busters
'Til the cops cuff us, we'll start ruckus and drop blockbusters
'Round the clock hustlers, you cannot touch us
first 3 bars I have no problem with, good rhyming & it's clear what he's saying. Why wasn't his entire verse like this.
I'm gettin wires niggaz wantin me dead, wantin my head
You think it could be somethin I said?
yeah maybe you annoyed them with your wackness.
Overall he had the good 3 bars, a couple good rhymes & a couple good lines in between a bunch of shit lines that were terribly rhymed. Now tell me how is this considered to be great and how do some people think this piece of shit is better then Eminems verse?
that he re wrote his verse?
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