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Does this happen to you too?

Postby GenePeer » Jun 25th, '10, 13:41

Sometimes I'm listening to a song, after a line it's like you instantly have a feeling of what (s)he's going to rhyme that line with. And then you're disappointed the rhyme that comes next is inexistent (yup no rhyme at all) or really not good like yours. The one that's been bugging me for a while is in 25 To Life's first verse.

....you neglect-ed me
....unexpectedly


The way he says neglect-ed me, it's obvious he was rhyming it with the previous line that ends with respect. But it would have sounded even better when he next line ends with something like "unexpectedly". Another one in So Bad
i must’ve got my pimpin genes from him, the way he left my momma
i’m [on] a rolling stone [cover], just like him, word of johnny drama


that would have sounded dope too, lol. I know it wouldn't make sense (come on don't tell me you were expecting serious discussion in Chit-Chat section), but definitely sounds good to the ear. So is it just me or do you sometimes feel like this too? if yeah, which songs did you feel like changing?
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Re: Does this happen to you too?

Postby Dark Blue » Jun 25th, '10, 15:30

yup happened to me a few times
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Re: Does this happen to you too?

Postby Solace » Jun 25th, '10, 15:54

I sorta get what you're talking about. I hear a line and I'm thinking, wow I could've structured that so much better in terms of flow/multi.
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Re: Does this happen to you too?

Postby WakeUpShow » Jun 28th, '10, 23:09

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Re: Does this happen to you too?

Postby GenePeer » Jun 30th, '10, 09:50

CoSh wrote:Image

*checks time* approx. 4 days late :p thnx for the bump though :y:
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