not only do my lines punch, they box
he who writes glass rhymes shouldnt throw rocks
my lines are sly, and always manage to outfox
your rhymes are safe, so im breaking the lock
Solace wrote:DerdyPK bringing it up a notch.
and Peace.
shadddyaftermatth wrote:Solace wrote:DerdyPK bringing it up a notch.
and Peace.
lol whos pk?
Solace wrote:Taking other peoples punchlines isn't hard to do.
Solace wrote:It shouldn't be hard if you start stealing other peoples punchlines
Solace wrote:Learn how to rhyme, structure, flow, incorporate multi-syllable rhymes, use internal rhymes, slight more complex rhyme schemes, punchlines, similes, metaphors, hell any decent use of rhetoric device...
And then come talk to me.
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